Saturday, 30 March 2013

ArShi SS ~ The Charmer and his Lady ~ Part 9


Part 9

Turmoil

Arnav grumpily moved towards the poolside feeling frustrated about their incomplete act. He ran his long fingers in between his hair and took long steps towards the open area.
This was one area he loved the most in his house. The area where he can relax and drain down his anxiety.
The Pool side.
It was a huge area covered with lush green grasses. The path was paved with grabbles which leaded to a huge pool. The pool area was covered with glass façade so that the it is illuminated with natural light during the day time and have the huge view of his vast estate while relaxing in the pool. The heated pool also had central heating system, which was effective during winter season. An attached bar served him the finest alcohols specially selected by him during his journey broad.
It was one Arnav’s private place and no one was allowed to servents were allowed to enter when he was inside.
Arnav threw his closes and removed the last piece of his clothing on the floor and dived inside the cool water.
After swimming full length of the pool he got up and made himself a drink. Sipping in one go he made another one and took it near the pool.
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Resting his head on the edge of the floor and immersing himself in the water Arnav closed his eyes and took a deep breadth.
I am a virgin”, her words still echoing in his mind.
Arnav turned towards the floor and again gulped down the whole red wine in one go.
“crap!” he slapped the water splashing it with a hard thud.
“Why Arnav Why? Why did you expect her to be different?” he mentally cursed her.
“Every girl is same. Just their way of attracting men are different. But all woman are same. This girl is also no different”, he threw the glass and broke into pieces.
“damn it!”
“but why the hell are you so angry? So what she is pretending? As if you are going to keep her with you forever? Come on dude? forgot your motto? Arnav Singh Raizada will never marry a girl. He will never give any girl his surname. Never. NEVER EVER”.
“but out of all the people why? Why did Khushi pretend? I thought at least she is transparent. Well it is another seekh (learning) for you”.
“I don’t care if she is virgin or not. Why should I be bothered? Not that I have forced her to be with me? She herself has agreed to be my girl-friend. Who cares who is her husband and why should I get effected whether she is truthful or not. I should mind my own business that’s it. I have wasted my time on her and I will not waste anymore”.
Enjoy
Fuck
The End.
Bas!
He dipped himself inside the pool and swim the full length underwater.
The moment he touched picked his head up from the water he saw Khushi standing near the door way.
One word
BEAUTIFUL
Her hair ruffled and skin to her skin, the white fabric of her long frock giving her an angelic look. He clean, fresh face sending tingling sensation inside his tummy. And her swollen lips awaking his desire once again.
“how can someone manage to look so beautiful all the time? And why is this female hell bend on showing herself simple? Was she really this much simple? Or is it a part of her seduction? Whatever it is, she knows her job well it looks and she is the master of seduction.
“Hi!” she said in a low voice.
“Want some drinks? Help yourself”.
“I don’t drink. Thanks but”.
Arnav let out a mocking tone and said, well Miss Gupta looks like you are hell bend on proving something.
Khushi narrowed her brows and looked at him, “what do you mean?”
“Nothing, I have soft drinks in the refrigerator, if you want have some”.
Khushi went towards the bar counter and poured some coke for herself in a wine glass.
Khushi kept looking at Arnav who was now taking a lap to come to the bar side while sipping her coke.
“should I get you something?” she asked.
Panting heavily he replied, “a glass of red wine please”.
“sure!” Khushi said and took his glass which was kept on the glass-tiled flooring and pour the red wine form the bottle from the table.
Handing over the glass to him she sat on the side of the pool dipping her legs.
“so, Miss gupta! Have you gone through the project file?” Arnav sipped his wine and chuckled.
Miss Gupta?” she thought. “Why was he acting so formal suddenly?”
“can I join you inside the pool?”
Arnav cocked his right eyebrows and checked her out. “like this?”
Khushi checked her dress and bit her lips. I haven’t brought any swim suit. I did not know you have a pool.
Arnav without further delay pulled her leg and khushi slipped inside the water.
Arnav held her dangerously close to him and that’s when Khushi came in contact with his broad masculine chest. He was not shaved. She noted. This dark brown hair in his chest made him look more manly and irresistible. He could feel her nipples pricking his chest through her dress and her lips parted anticipating his next move.
“Why so much pretends miss gupta?” he couldnot help anymore but to ask. He himself was shocked by his behaviour. No matter now much he prepared himself not to ask, but he failed miserably.
“pretend? Pretend what Arnav?”
“Oh come on babes”
“I am not getting you Arnav. What are you talking about?” Khushi held her chest while she spoke.
“Pretend that you are naïve, untouched” Arnav pushed her a little and turned to gulp down his wine.
Khushi stopped him and turned him towards her.
She knew she is not answerable to him. It was her personal thing and why would she explain him? And for what? This relationship has no future. None of them expect any long term relationship out of this. And even if this is long term they are both aware of why they were together. It was only sexual attracting nothing else. He wanted to satisfy his hunger and she wanted to take revenge on her husband by moving now showing him that she is not a fool to wait for him for her entire life.
But despite of the reality she chose to tell him, “I am not pretending. I am untouched”.
Arnav stared at her for few seconds. His heart wanting to believe what she was saying but his mind refused to accept.
“I have never shared a bed with my husband. He never touched me”. Khushi dindot want to make fool out of herself. She did not want to tell that like a stupid she waited of her man for 20 years who never showed up. She did not wanted to be a laughing stock in front of him. She carefully hid the truth but she did not lie to Arnav.
“its upto you whether you want to believe or not. And I am sure you will know that what I am saying is the truth in due course of time. This is something I cannot hide or pretend”.
“what about boyfriends? Never had any?”
“you are my first” she said holding her chin up.
Now that statement was enough for Arnav to get aroused once again. Isnt that what he wanted few minutes back when he was all over her?
He did not know why he felt special suddenly. He did not know why her virginity turned him on more. He did not know why he felt proud of himself for being the first for her.
He pulled her in his embrace and kissed her passionately.
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146 comments:

  1. OMG AMAZING UPDATE <3
    I loved the things Arnav was thinking <3 he is so right about it..

    Loved it..very nicely written..and end was dazzling.

    ~Vani

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    1. vani di u r no less...... u both appy di n u competet well n m just a gone case fr u both

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  2. wow i got to read 2 updates together *(happy dance)*
    well coming to the previous update i liked the way khushi viewed the note written by arnav....that was a pleasant indetail writing also the way her emotions were expressed while going around the bathroom - showed the gentle thoughts of khushi
    lovly

    in todays' update the turmoil of arnav well portrayed in fact it shows his inner feelings of mistrust to women(with deception) with whom he has dated....and he sudden urge to feel special towards khushi was well brought out with the entire poolside play
    enjoyed it ......pls continue soon

    amus5

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  3. Fabulous update...
    Arnav should feel special cause Khushi is giving him her most precious asset..
    I think Khushi is doing the right thing by moving on.. Why should she wait for her jerk husband for whom she has already waisted her 20 years..

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  4. me third :D

    Awesome part Loved it!
    Felt sad for Khushi!
    Arnav is not wrong anyways..

    Cant wait for the next part.

    Update soon!

    I found this link on twitter!

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  5. Oh I forgot I am Sarunfanatic_Ji from IF :D

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  6. Wow Awesome yar
    Arnav thinking is right in his way
    But i Love this khushi yar her Confidence loved it
    Being First Arnav is celebrating in heart
    waiting for next....!

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  7. Again one word awesomeeeeee and awesomiesttt for u

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  8. Hey dear Hie I m orchids8888 from IF.

    Wow I m so happy dear that I got to read 2 parts in a row. M so happy.

    Coming to the update, Arnav's turmoil was well portrayed. Till date he has come across women who are fake, so its hard to believe for him that Khushi is still a virgin and also she is not faking it. whatever she is saying is true.

    Eagerly waiting for the next part. I hope Arnav and Khushi consummate in next update. Continue soon. Waiting for a super hot update.

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  9. Wow 2 updates in a day... Day by day I loving khushi character yaar.. Such a bold personality... Serves right for arnav... Loved the update

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  10. OMG OMG OMG
    simply one word...
    PERFECT.....
    superb update yar......
    now i think Arnav will be more happy....
    plz update soon

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  11. So much jealousy,happiness....


    asr demanding answers and khushi giving answers.


    arnt they expecting more from eachother unknowingly

    sumu

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    1. haha! ;) they are two crazy duffer couple

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  12. i had juz read til chptr 2..
    afta dt..no pm n no mail abt d updtes..:P

    was juz goin thru d blog n realizd dt sooo many chptrs hav been updted..

    soo...dey r nw in 4 it..

    Khushi has moved on in her lyf..n z tryin 2 liv n njoi her lyf..
    her husbnd dint cum..
    who's it?
    bby any chnce z it Arnav?

    20 yrs ...sooo may b dey hav sum pastwell..
    Arnav z njoin her company..n so z she..

    no xpctations n no demands..

    dey bth wnts d same thing..n she's ready 2 giv it..

    bt he has 2 no abt her past evn,,wish she wud tel him..:P


    she dsnt wnt ne personal question..


    i hope dey wud sttle dwn slowly n slwly..:)


    doo mail me wen u updte or..dooo pm..:)

    mail id..yaa dis 1 only..its *reallyhappyy@gmail.com*

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  13. awesome ,awesome and simply awesome...loving it to the core ...u r absolutely amazing appy,love u

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  14. IT WAS PERFECT. LOVED IT:) (IF:Arshisarunfan)

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  15. AWESUM.... Finally he wil cum 2 knw at her truth... He wntd her 2 b diff 4m others n indeed shez d 1... <3 <3 <3 Waiting 4 nxt part...

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  16. arnav is feeling guilty to have sex with her being a virgin at the same time he cannot believe that such a beautiful woman is not touched at all despite being married, even by her husband. awesome interesting, waiting to read the next chapter. (IF user id laksh65)

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  17. Khushi is so sure about her decisions.

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  18. I so loved how u portrayed arnav‘s turmoil n trust issues with women..
    n suddenly how spl he felt when khushi said he was her first one

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  19. Awesome...
    he is feeling happy to be her first... isn't it more than attraction... ;)

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  20. perfect n beautiful
    thnks appy

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  21. Superb.... It's just perfect...
    Just love it...
    Oh my god.. u r just awesome...
    Thanks a lot for two updates in day...

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  22. wow loved d update.....
    awesome.....
    very well written....
    cntinue soon....
    nirmal1992

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  23. awesome update.evrrything crystal clear.

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  24. Ohh again an update wowww
    Loved it as usual

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  25. amazing update....!
    So arnie boy is thinking differently abt dis girl though he is trying hard to bhave like he is simply there wit her for physical attraction but still he cannot help himslf nd finally he asked her how d hell she can b a virgin even being married....!
    Boy,agree it u feel sumthng different for dis innocent girl nd khushi who nvr thought to unfold her personal issues in front of arnav said it dat she is actually a virgin....hmmm nice nice....both r treating each other differently witout even knwing it....
    Beautifully written di....
    Simply fabulous....!
    I totally loved it....!

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  26. read two chapters together..loving the way story is moving....awesome dear....
    nishu_shorna(from IF)

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  27. amazing update..!!
    loved how Khushi is always so simple...
    and Arnav...not in love...but possessive about his lady...
    interesting..!!

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  28. wow! awesome part......
    arnav have bad past...that's why he behaved like this with khushi..
    arnav asked her...khushi replied patiently...arnav more exciting to act now...yes he is dam happy...he is her first....
    update soon......

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  29. both of them are trying to pretend that here in this relationship no strings attached ....... but unconsciously slowly slowly they are actually falling for each other.... WOW.... her being untouched having a great affect on Arnav..... Loved it .... Awesome

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  30. loved all the updates. Both of them are falling badly for each other. Its way beyond sexual desire shaping into something meaningful.
    Why I have a feeling Arnav is Khushi's bachpan ka pyar or her husband.

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  31. jst read ur ff..i lovd it..wat a story..pls update soon..n pls pm me whn u update..

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  32. when is the next update???
    loved it
    read everything in one go

    luvbarunsanaya6

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  33. rimi(rimirocks)30 March 2013 at 21:36

    nice update,got 2 see a glimpse of arnav's feelings 2wards love,relationships,girls etc.But dont understand why men even after being wth so many girls wish 2 the first of their spl lady??????

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  34. It was awesome..loved it

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  35. Awwww So nice Arnav believed Khushi. Happy. SO is coming ?????

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  36. For Khushi this started out as revenge against her husband and for Arnav sexual desire

    Arnav wished he was her first and now he is getting his wish
    Now they are both falling for each other unknowingly

    cant wait to read what happens next

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  37. OMG..!! Just afraid that Arnav might hurt her.. His tongue sometimes..!! But can't blame him entirely. Atleast they are BACK again.. :) :D

    pepples_joy

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  38. awesome update!! arnav started feeling for her like he is happy that her husband didnt touch her.... cant wait for next part

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  39. awsome update !! cant wait for next part...

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  40. Wow wow wow eagerly waiting for the next part

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  41. Arnav has so many issues man.... he wants it.. he doesn't believes anyone... great update. .. love it

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  42. Awesome update.Arnav's inner turmoil proves that not only physically but also emotionally he is attracted to khushi.can't wait for next update .;)

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  43. beautifully written
    liked the way she spoke to misha, how she wants to be herself no matter what

    her behavior towards mohan, simply adorable, loved the way she took the note and felt it

    arnavs mind and heart in turmoil to believe or not, loved the way she confronted him saying he would get to know

    thanks for pm dear
    ITS_LEENA - IF

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  44. Amazing update............he is fighting within himself.........Thanks for the PM

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  45. Wow awesome update Appy.

    You Rock \m/ Gal

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  46. Loved it
    rohinid if

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  47. wooowww amazing one yet again...

    __
    Swati (IF id - swatim318)

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  48. awesome update
    thanks!
    lakshyaNkt

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  49. amazing update

    loved it

    he really want khushi to be different

    and he pround that he is her first

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  50. Fabulous updates.. Is Khushi married during her childhood itself and she is still waiting for her friend-cum-husband for the past 20 years or is it that they had been in love since childhood and after marriage he left her.. Arnav doesn't believe Khushi when she said she is a Virgin..why? He could sense that but still why he couldn't accept that she is telling the truth..Both of them are equally attracted and falling for each other, thought they don't want to claim, for Khushi this started out as revenge against her husband and for Arnav sexual desire. Arnav wished he was her first and now he is getting his wish, and I'm sure he will be elated when he witnesses the truth....Would this intimacy between them take their relationship to the next level....curiously waiting to see that happen.. - Reality Truth ( IF User )

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  51. Appy .. read ur FF all in one go..

    i really really liked it...

    its somehow different from the rest of ur work..
    i liked the Khushi u have in this ...
    will stalk this blog from now on!! :)
    thanks for the update!

    ~Leena
    IF ID LeenaRocks

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  52. ugh.....lovely...bit left me wanting for more!!!!

    just cant resist this ss u r writing!! its awesome to see how happy he is to be khushis 1st...hehe...definitely not how ASR is supposed to react, but it was cute!! and ofcourse, waiting impatiently to read their 1st encounter!! ;) :p

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  53. she s waited for 20years *shock*
    read the three updates...fabulous updates dear *claps*
    sorry for late reply dear...was not able to come online
    update the next soon dear:)

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  54. wow the story is going really nice. just finished reading 7,8 and 9. awesome parts. can't wait.

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  55. wow the story is going really nice. just finished reading 7,8 and 9. awesome parts. can't wait.

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  56. Awesome update.
    Khushi was being truthful and Arnav it seems has believed her.
    The last where he hugs her is sweet.

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  57. awesome update

    updt soon

    summaiyasayed

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  58. fantastic update
    loved it

    -drunkiiebabe-

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  59. Awesome update
    Loving the way the story is progressing

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  60. Wonderful update!!

    Arnav's POV is superb!!
    Beautifully written!

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  61. Hey I read all the chapters in one go... You are one amazing writer and write passionate chapters which grip the audiences and leave them panting for me. I am hooked on to this story and closely follow all your writings on IF and your blogs....

    Waiting for the next chapter..

    ths....Rakhee

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  62. Just read the whole 1-9 parts. It was awesome!!! Different that usual. Loving it, can't wait to know more.

    Blablabla_mo7 IF

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  63. Fabulous update! Arnav is just in turmoil! In general, he is very cynical about relationships! Yet, in his heart he knows Khushi is different but his mind is the opposite! I'm so glad they talked and try to clear the air! Khushi is right because Arnav will learn the truth about her virginity! He is so flattered that he will be her first! Thank you!! Eagerly waiting for part 10!

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  64. awesome awesome

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  65. hey
    AWESOME STORY
    LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT

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  66. damn arnav is falling for her rather i wod say he has :p :p
    great job :D

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  67. Hey,

    Amti4u here... Thank you for the Pm and the linkss...

    Loved th whole update...actually, I am reading from 2nd chapter onwards just now, and I absolutely loved this Charmer and his ladyy... Now, that he got to know that she is untouched, there wont be any stopping...*gutter mind*... Loved it

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  68. OMG ... ts is just superb..
    just read all chapters in one go...
    hayeeee loved it so much..
    Arnav and khusi both r really duffer.. they r pretending tht they cant affect each other.. but unknowingly they r falling more and more for each other.. Now Arnav knew she is virgin ahem ahem... now what is going to happen between them??? already imagining .. Rofllll.. waiting for next update.. Thank u so much appy for pm..
    Bhagawati - IF

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  69. I just love this Khushi who is so herself...she does not feel the need to justify herself to anyone. I like that aspect.

    Arnav too is complicated.....this story is just sooooo interesting.

    They have chemistry for sure...

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  70. 2 confuse souls!!-------------they r unknowingly doing eat they dont wish to do ever........interesting..!!

    so the journey has started wid the hidden expectations and explanations from their "no string attachment"................;)

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  71. Nice update! He is not the husband she has been waiting for, is he? Cause this will definitely create a wall between them as he will think she tricked him in accepting her . . . Well he got his wish to be her first, hope he does appreciate it and shows her some love . . . .

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  72. OMG That was fab
    so Arnav knows That he will be her 1st n he likes it

    thanks for pm plz keep em comin. n continue soon

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  73. Wow fab update dii....
    Waiting eagerly for the future updates....

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  74. SUPER DUPER...Appy pls do continue fast...this is incredibly fantastic...loved it to bits

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  75. Awesome
    Missmk if

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  76. IF: Cheval

    amazing fabulous update super awesome will the hot session be held in the poool :) ehehhe

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  77. Omg.omg..
    this story is just mind blowing..
    fantabulous.
    loved it..
    arniepervaiz

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  78. awesum updt...poor confused arnav...loved their convo...ooops she waited fr hr hubby fr 20 yrs...she better move on...looks like a passionate updt cuming up...would love to read it...continue sooon...
    ushankitvc

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  79. loving ittt!!! and this very reason will be why arnav will fall in love with her!!! but dont make it soooon!!!

    make it wayyyy longgg =D

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  80. Read this ff all in one go... Like the confident Khusi who is ready to take decisions keeping her happiness in mind.
    Arnav contempt and mistrust of his previous girlfriends is beautifully portrayed though Khusi is affecting him :) he is happy to be her first

    Will wait for your next update
    Poonam
    IF - paaskhanna

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  81. omg,loved it.
    MISTIE,IF

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  82. Loved it

    -Sadi-

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  83. Read all chaps in one go....
    Ufffff.....
    They were ah.mazing.....
    I am literally dead....
    Oh gosh....
    IF.....anamika90

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  84. awesome update
    loved it

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  85. finally read all missing updates.. thanks appy for the link
    amazing updates... loved it

    they both are attracted to each other...
    arnav is feeling different toward her, a new sensation.. he should be proud that he is her first one

    who is khushi's husband?? reveal the mystery soon

    jas0308 (IF)

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  86. I have read almost all your works n I must say this outstands all other works of urs
    I got this link long back from you but just now got time to read all the chapters in one go...
    loved Ur work :)
    keep writing :)

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  87. have read almost all your works n I must say this outstands all other works of urs
    I got this link long back from you but just now got time to read all the chapters in one go...
    loved Ur work :)
    keep writing :)
    thanks
    Shalu

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  88. Oh my! Amazing update! Is arnav the husband khushi waited for? Interesting!

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  89. OMG APPY i love it...pehle toh ur lovelyy FF..Forbidden Desire its hell awsome n i love this new one...beautifully written:)
    My first reaction is always...Uff APPY...how can you write sooo much?

    Very nice FF...you described the full range of emotions ARHI went through superbly.....I read all the parts in one go..
    AROOSHEE

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  90. Awesome update .... Arnav started to feel spl abt her ....Who is khushi husband ???
    pinky89

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  91. Totally loved this story.
    Actually I love all your story.
    In this I am in love with Khushi, she is bold, independent, sensible, ready to take life as challenge.
    I am looking forward to this story and exited.
    Thanks for the link of the blog appy.


    Archnahardik123 ( IF )

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  92. Amazing, please continue soon!!!

    ~Dee~

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  93. Human especially male[mean]-minds ;) ..they always expect, admire, lust over the untouched one...

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  94. It seems like the table is turn in this relationship! Arnav wants to know more about khushi then he need to know.

    If
    Opsyellow

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  95. hi appy, sorry been a bit away for the last couple of days. but didnt miss much i see. 2 chapters only. well, ice update with hot and sizzling happenings and a little more about the past peeping through ;)

    loved how u described their turmoils and expectations. i was like what the mood when arnav left her knowing she is virgin. i was saying "man, isnt that what u wanted even it sounded impossible?"

    haha.. nice update

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  96. love all the chapters..amazing!! finally, khushi moved on..she is so honest..the emotions they went through was awesome
    aww! poor khushi,she couldnt resist him.
    fabulous!!

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  97. Finishing reading the nine parts...
    awesome update...
    thank you.

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  98. This story is definitely taking a new twist. i feel really sorry for Arnav. In French there is a saying that goes 'Tel qui est pris qui croyait prendre'. This is exactly what is happenning with ASR here!!

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  99. read it all in one go...i loved it..this khushi is so different...and i like that change..ASR has fallen for her no matter what.and khushi waited for her prince right?? so that means she never had feelings for her husband...then why did she marry him? only becoz of their parents?? this is so interesting sis..will wait for the next update :)

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  100. Amazing update…but why he is thinking she is pretending.
    Being the first one he is dancing inside his heart…lovely
    Update soon….Appy!!!

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  101. Nice one waiting for next update

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  102. Awesome updates !!! read from 5 to 9 together.. Arnav is becoming bit possessive of Khushi it seems, first he wanted to be her first and when she told him, he felt she is pretending but in the end when she told me the reality he is happy to be her first.. what is happening to great Arnav Singh Raizada why all of sudden he is interested in some girl????

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  103. amazing updates !!!!! :)
    (aks555)

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  104. i love dis ss appy...read all the 9 chapters in one go....u r again amazing....

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  105. Nice update.....finally they had a conversation and everything got cleared...update soon...

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  106. Awesum update..arnav was little jealous..bt he wud never agree..he is unknowingly going towards marriage and long term relationship..he want to knw abt her..and she is answering his question too...waiting for next

    -nishi22 frm IF

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  107. Wonderful update.....they talked in a pool....nice environment.....soothing
    But I truly want to know what is Khushi past.....
    Update next part soon.

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  108. OMG that was a awesome update .....

    love the chapter .........

    can't wait to read the next chapter and know whats gonna happen although my guttermind is active ........ lol.........

    please update soon .............

    IF: sweetvanie

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  109. DAMN HE WAS SURE SHE WAS PLAYING WITH HIM SO GLAD SHE SHOWED HER CONFIDENCE AND DID NOT BACK DOWN AWESOME UPDATE HE IS GETTING POSSESSIVE OF HER

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  110. kitne din se koi update ni :(



    sikhni_ IF

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  111. read the update just today!
    so arnav felt good knowing that khushi was truly a virgin!

    why do I feel that he is the man whome khushi was married to!

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  112. very well, drafted.....
    the emotions,were brought out efficiently......
    i m a fan of ur words, the way u write... hatts off

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  113. Read all the last three updates in a go!!!

    Amazinggg updates!!

    Poor khushi, why wid her hubby/besties do this to her....i know story will unfold across its course

    My first reaction when she told Abt her virginity was that arnav would hav done a happie dance mentally but wth he left

    Arnav is already seem to be more effected than he actually thot...n I guess he myt fall in love
    But khushi will never want to get married

    Guess this is what story is abt

    Its already so interesting!!!

    Amazinggg update!!!

    Robinhood008 IF

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  114. just read all the 9 parts
    why didn't arnav believe she was telling the truth
    didn't he wanted to be her first??
    but glad he accepted this
    when will you get khushi's husband
    n will now arshi take things forward

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  115. Amazing update..Well Arnav has some unknown feelings towards Khushi
    continue soon dear...

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  116. wowwwww.... the story is soooo gripping... i lorved it... arnav n khushi's relationship is awesome..
    yusam

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  117. Please update! Can't wait dear!

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  118. Fab. Khushi told him the truth.

    -desisweetheart9 from IF.

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