Sunday 21 April 2013

ArShi SS ~ The Charmer and his Lady ~ Part 14




Part 14

Grumpy Raizada

Khushi and Misha were almost done shopping. She needed a good suit for the meeting that was schedule to take place in maldivies. Not that she did not have one, but she had to get a better-cut suit to stand to match up with Arnav Singh Raizada. It was her first overseas venture and it was a big project for her. If she proved herself in his project she knew her future would be set. Being associated with AR is not a small thing. It was THE AR which was recognized worldwide not just in India.
Apart from the suit, she bought some flowy knee length frocks, which ended moderately. Rather than clinging on to her and moulding her figure it gave her a casual holiday look. She liked with her garments gave way to the air to pass through. It helped her specially during summer and summer climate. She never felt comfortable in those clothes, which flaunted her perfect curvy body. She rather preferred to hide herself under her clothes and preferred to remain notice by other men for some reason. That’s how Khushi kumari gupta was.
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It was indeed a little emotional separation… In these years she always stuck to misha like a second skin, no matter where she was but she was within her reach. But she was leaving town for good long 3 days. All along these years after Misha’s father death at a very early age when they moved to Mumbai from Lucknow after khushi’s parents’ death, they took care of each other like soul sisters.
Khushi was excited to be with Arnav at the same time a little sad for having to leave misha behind all alone. Misha did say “oh come on cookie, I will be fine. I am not a baby. You better concentrate on your Arnav Ji” she said in a teasing tone. Misha, when she was young couldn’t pronounce Khushi, it sounded like cookie to all. Thus cookie became her second nickname tintin being the first. Her parents used to call her by that name including everyone at home.
“Mish, I am really….” Khushi held Misha’s hand while getting inside her car, but before she could complete the word sorry and apologize to misha for leaving her like this.
“Shut up now, go…you are getting late. And if I am not wrong your phone beeped for the 13th time”, misha said pointing at Khushi’s buzzing phone.
Khushi looked at her phone and sighed.
Misha quickly planted a kiss on khushi’s forehead and turned her heels controlling her tear, which was in a verge of slipping and walked away in the opposite direction so that Khushi couldnot stop her.
But Khushi being Khushi got out of the car and ran behind misha. After all she was her best friend and Misha did not need to tell Khushi that she is crying.
Khushi pulled her in bone crashing hug and weeped with her. “I will miss you darling. Please take care of yourself. Khushi kissed misha’s warm cheeks and cupped her. She Pouted, looking at Misha’s tears. A guilt spread across khushi’s mind. How could she leave her best friend-cum-sister-cum-everything for a man. A man she bearly knew. Just for her own pleasure she was leaving behind Misha. She felt horrible and low of herself. She wanted to ring Arnav back and cancel this trip and tell him to go alone even knowing that how important it was for her career.
“Don’t you dare think of canceling this Khushi!”, misha spoke holding khushi’s wrist as if she could read her mind. And why not. They have been together for such a long time that just as Khushi did not need misha to tell her whether she was upset or sad, similarly misha did not need Khushi to open her mouth to share her thoughts.
Misha turned Khushi by her shoulder and gave her a final friendly push… “GO and GET the happiness that you deserve Cookie. My eyes saw what they wanted to see today in the morning… you better find out what I am trying to mean… Arnav is your future and he will not disappoint you like that ASS. Open up with him, he is a different man altogether. Trust me”. With that she waved at Khushi and finally walked away. Khushi kept on looking at Misha’s retreating from and finally disappeared in the crowd.
Khushi started the engine and headed towards the airport immersed in what Misha had just said. “What did she mean what she saw? Did she see something, which I didn’t? Did she meet Arnav while I was sleeping? What does she mean by he is a different man?” her chain of thoughts broke when her phone buzzed again. She had been ignoring her test messages since she wanted to give her full attention to misha before she leave for Maldives. But this time she check. It was 14 text messseges from Arnav. Khushi quickly checked halting the car.
20: 08 “hey beautiful…give me a call once you are free”
20:13 “looks like you are all geared up for shopping”
20:22 “what are you buying? I am just curious”. Khushi’s lips curled up in a smile.
20: 30 “buy some sexy bikinis which I can rip while I make love to you on beach”. Something flattered inside her tummy visualizing their hot love making session on the beach both covered with sand and the ocean kissing their foot time to time while they hungrily make love to each other.
20: 45 “keep a spare panty inside your over night bag ;)”, khushi’s face flushed in embarrassment thinking of what he meant. He wants to take her in the aircraft? “Wild”, she thought.
20: 47 “are you a lesbian?” Khushi’s flashed face immediately paled. What has gotten him to write that?
20: 53 “you really don’t need to shop as we will hardly wear anything when we will be alone”.
20: 58 “you have a perfect body, try to get something which shows it off, atleast when you are with me”. “Shit” Khushi mentally cursing herslef for not seeing this message before otherwise along with other clothes she might have brought some of his choice.
21:02 “cant wait to hold you back in my arms”
21: 03 “I want you so badly”
21:06 “this is the first time someone had ignored me for so long. Khushi who was smiling all through suddenly tensed up.
21: 30 “come to my guest, there is a slight change in plan”. Khushi noted the difference between the last message and this message. “oh so someone is angry that I ignored him” a cute giggle escaped her mouth. “I will make it up for this”, she kissed the mobile screen visualizing it as Arnav’s face.
21: 31 “we will be traveling in your private jet. So take your time and come. There is no hurry”. Khushi frowned a little feeling a little said that suddenly he became aloof. She was enjoying his flirty talks so much but suddenly he stopped. She knew she was the reason, but she had her own reasons, which she would explain once she reached.
21: 45 “I expected an answer, but never mind it looks like you are in between some important meeting… much more important than our travel I guess” a sheer jealousy and possessiveness was evident in the tone that he wrote. But why? Why was Arnav singh Raizada jealous? Does he want her undivided attention? “aw! How cute” she thought. After he ignored her whole day now he is trying to make up? She thought like a new couple in love. She pouted. “it serves you well Mr. Raizada. But I am all yours for next 3 days, you can do whatever you want to with me” she blushed crimson and diverted her car towards his guest-house.
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There aranv was pretty annoyed with her ignorance and here she was standing at her doorstep.  She rung the bell and waited biting her lips in excitement. Excited to see her man. The man who too in this very house. The house where she lost all her senses. The sense, which that man had full control on. The control that she wanted to loose in front of Arnav. Arnav, the first man in her life. The life, which was pale, stale, un-thrilling and lack of excitement now which took a total U-Turn.
Her chain of thoughts broke when his servant opened the door. With a big smile he greeted his madam getting an overwhelming smile from Khushi in return.
“How have you been?” she asked in a simple gentle tone.
“I…I am fine madam”, he moved to give way to Khushi.
“Umm! Arnav ji?....” Khushi tried to sneak inside to have a look but she couldnot see him anywhere.
“He is in his study madam. Waiting for you”. the servent said crisply.
Khushi did not know why she felt nervous all of a sudden. Her throat went dry as she walked across the huge living area on the ground floor.
She was about to take her seat on the sofa and dial Arnav, when she heard a crisp not so friendly tone, “so shall we proceed or do you plan to be here for the next 3 days?”. The voice was flat and serious.
Khushi’s eyes shoot up at the source of the voice. “Cant he stop looking breath takingly handsome for one day?” Khushi felt his presence, his strong presence when he strolled down the mahogany staircase. In his three piece, creaseless suit, clean shaven, he looked no less than a greek god. He looked much more than handsome in real life then in his pictures. He looked much taller and much fairer and his hair had a blonde sheen.
“I am sorry I could….not….” she couldnot finish when he said…
“Lets not waste more time my jet is ready. We have to drive to the airport”, his words came out in an emotionless manner.
Arnav finally reached in front of her and looked directly in her eyes making her look down to control her desire to hug him right away. His musky smell mixed with his own manly small did not fail to arouse her.
“hug him?” Khushi snapped up and searched in his eyes. Why the hell she wants to hug him? Not that they both shared a very strong relationship where hugs and kisses are natural. They are not like regular couples where they hug and kiss when they meet up or part ways. Khushi fisted her finger and controlled herself from being flung in his embrace.
Arnav narrowed his eyes and looked at Khushi who took two steps back. “so she did not even want to hug me and apologize for not contacting me for the whole day?” Arnav’s anger was bottling up.
Khushi gave a slight nod in approval and bit her lips.
Arnav turned to go when Khushi stopped him holding his shoulder. He tiled his head sideways not looking at her though.
“Are you angry?” Khushi asked him nervously.
Arnav did not answer her back. He shrugged off her hand and walked passed the main door.
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130 comments:

  1. loved the update beautifully written thanks for adding me on if love your work alot!!!!!!!!!!!!!<3

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  2. loved the flirty messages by him ;)
    aww...misha and khushi s bond s beautiful :)
    aww..arnie baby is angry....am sure she ll convince him back ;) :)
    fantastic update *claps*
    update the next soon dear:)

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  3. awesome update! loved the way he texted her and kept on telling wat he wanted from her in these 3 days!

    awhh he is angry now! but can wait to see how khushi ll woo him:)

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  4. Mind blowing update i think your wording your work is beyond praises!!!!!!!!! U r a true writer appy......... Im addicted to ur ffs...... Dnt no hw im gona survive when u will left writing.!!!!!!!! Plz dnt ever quit keep writing

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  5. awesome part......
    so arnav too much angry.....
    hope khushi can make it hot make up.....
    update soon......

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  6. Awesum..oh arnav is so flirty and naughty..hope to c some improvement in their relation..3 day wil turn their life..hope khushi thnk abt wat misha said.

    -nishi22 frm IF

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  7. Awesome update.. Arnav is such a flirt.. N khushi is such sweet heart n caring friend... Hope in next update khushi will make up with arnav

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  8. Loved this update ,
    Arnav angry that means somthing passionate is coming in next chapter

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  9. just read your ff all in one part. loved it a lot. i suspect kushi's husband is none other than asr himself, because you did not specify kushi's age when she got married, maybe a childhood marriage. eagerly waiting for your next update.

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  10. OMFG I CANT FREAKIN BELIEVE I MISSED THIS STORY I THOT U STOPPED UPDATING IT

    EEksss ok summed up, man Khushi's character is so well portrayed..she's such an angel, man :D
    love her
    and Arnav..OMG he's sooo hotttt and u have described his attitude and appearance very very well
    he is angry now lets see wat happens next :D

    lemme follow this blog .

    ~Vani

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  11. That was awesome, Khushi has a lot of making up to do...

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  12. Loved the bond that the two soul sisters share.........

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  13. wow...loved it....awweee...ASR is angry...but justifiable...Now Khushi didnt even hug him...:(
    I am dying to see how they make up.....

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  14. °̩ Ł♡νe ur stories , add ℳε to ur blog

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  15. Loved the bond that the two soul sisters share.........

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  16. Khushi and Misha are very close. Glad Misha managed to push Khushi into going.
    The flirty texts from Arnav were so sweet then it seems he got really angry.
    Looks like Khushi may have to do a lot of pacifying to get Arnav's mood back to what it was.
    Awesome update.

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  17. Nice update
    Naughty angry Arnav n excited nervous Khushi
    Thanks for update.

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  18. awesome update appy,loved the msg part. & a big hug for the update.

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  19. loved it...

    hope khushi makes up for the ignorance in the next update..

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    Swati

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  20. hehehe he is so angry god help our poor khushi

    i am so exited to read the next chapter

    amazing apdate dear

    (rokaya IF)

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  21. so Mr.raizada is angry....oho dats cute....he wants a full on attention....khushi baby,try to undrstnd he needs ur attention....so now Mr.Raizada is in angry nd now khushi manofoy him....
    Waiting for the trip now....
    Superb update as usual di....
    Love ya :*

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  22. It's lovely update i hope in next update is full of feelings and emotions. Yeah! I'm truly excited for next

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  23. It's lovely update i hope in next update is full of feelings and emotions. Yeah! I'm truly excited for next

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  24. oh boy.....all the prnt up emotions n anger n then a flight confinement to maldives. thats gonna be a volatile flight.

    looking fwd to next chapter.

    loved the sextings.

    avni

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  25. loved the update
    wanted to see how khushi will make his angry cool

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  26. Awesome update as always....;-)
    Misha n khushi are like soul siss....
    Aww... Loved that massages ... <3
    Oh... Arnav is too ANGRY.....
    Hope she makes up soon...
    Eagerly waiting to read more....

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  27. Awesome update....
    Ohh hotwa is demm angry.....
    She has to do something nw...
    Just love it....

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  28. Awwesome update
    rohinid (IF )

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  29. very nice update.....we all know what comes next after a fight....

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  30. lovely update.....

    how will she face up his anger.... waiting....

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  31. super awesome update Appy ...........

    please update soon ..........

    can't wait to read the next chapter .......

    IF: sweetvanie

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  32. Aww....... That was sad :( Arnav is grumpy with Khushi for ignoring him the whole day ;) What will happen next?
    Wonderful update :)
    Update soon :D

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  33. ohhhh such a lovely updt.....loved it

    if-chahat128
    fb-suman suriya

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  34. awww poor arnav so angry that she ignored him.... cant wait to see how she catches him

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  35. Nce agn a superb nd awsum updte!
    Indeed d title of dis chap perfctly suits arnav's mood. Jus luv flirty raizada.
    D bond misha nd khushi share is mre dan frnds do itz much mre abve it.:)
    jus cn't wait fr d nxt updte i knw drez lot gonna 2 read!!!
    IF: Barunsara

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  36. awesome update !! the entire text conversation is just amazing... hope khushi patches up soon with arnav
    on the whole a wonderful update !
    Shalu

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  37. Awesome update..Arnav had been sending flirty messages to her and she didn't bother to check nor respond.. Khushi is repenting that she didn't check his messages, as she could have packed some of the clothes as per his likings or desire..I'm damn sure that Arnav would do shopping for her their and get her sexy bikini's in which he wants to see her :-)... Arnav is angry, wow, Khushi has to pacify him... what is she planning to do.. will she initiate making love to him or gave him the pleasure of seeing her as per his desires in some sexy clothes and cools down his temper... curiously waiting to see what is in store in the next chapter..

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  38. ohhh so mr. Charmer got angry with his Lady ....... khushi shouldn't do this ...... how come she ignore those msgs ....

    now it would be worth to read about how khushi going to woo him ...

    plzzzz update soon

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  39. I liked the update... mostly cause of the Khushi that we have in this story... i love the role that you have shaped up for her... strong .. independent and more so not cause of the decision she has taken for herself in life... not to live in the past ... and carry on with no strings attached!:) yes that somehow added loads of decisiveness to her character ...
    Arnav ... well expected this outta u .. not like head over heals like this... and now you are all angry coz she dint pay attention to u? ha ha ... u are forgetting mister ... she is clear she is not gonna be emotionally attached with u... well thats what atleast she claims to do! :)
    so stick by the conditions!! will ya mister!? :)
    lets see what happens next!
    Thanks for the update Appy!

    ~Leena

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  40. I loved today's update .

    Loved Khushi and misha's bonding a lot. Khushi was behaving like a child who is going school for the first time.

    Arnav was also right for being angry as she didn't even reply him back.

    I am exited to know how she is going to make arnav happy.

    Thanks for the update.

    Archnahardik123 ( IF )

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  41. cheval

    love the update dear emotional sis part awww pooor them gna be separated for 3 days bt i love misha such a nice gurl too

    anyway the msg ahahhaha was awesome bt now hmmmm i hope they both talk n i mean kushi try to explain wat happened

    awwww arnav expecting a hug n kkushi thinking the same but ....

    cant wait for the trip plz plz update more sooooon plzzzzz

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  42. awww....I just Love this !!
    really excited for next update !!

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  43. hi appy...once again superb update....i raelly love flirty side of arnav and his flirty messages...and arnav is angry becoz he thought that khushi ignord him...good...ab maza ayega dkhte hain what she will do kaise manati hai...and as someone said here above i also thinkshow am gona servive when u stop writing...plz plz plz dont ever stop writing,especially about arnav n khushi....thanks for the update...be blessed...

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  44. Khushi deserves his anger...
    now lets see how she makes it up for him..

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  45. hey appy dii.. first n foremost "ALL THE VERY VERY VERY BEST FOR YUR NOVEL".. sorry i didn't cmnt earlier.. was busy with my exams & nw when its over i decided to catch up with all the part.... to say i "LOVED" all these 14 chaps. would b understatement... i never realisd whn time flew by while reading these parts.. i adored this part a lot too..very very amazingly written..& update the next part soon.. :)
    GMSK (IF)

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  46. hhahahhaha---r u lesbian!!!!

    grumpy raizada perfect~~:D

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  47. Awesome update
    So ernav is angry at her , waiting for next update already to know how will Khushi coax him

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  48. rimi(rimirocks)22 April 2013 at 02:32

    Oh i loved the flirty messages.and "Tintin"????????hw do u know hw luks more handsome in real life u did nt evev turn up at the meet and geet in kolkata tolly club day???????haha,and u really noticed the recent blonde shhen in his long manes,i thought it was only mee

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  49. awesome update :) cant wait to see how khushi makes it upto arnav hehe

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  50. Some one has become a teenage lover boy. So they are having their first nok jhok Awww

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  51. it was nice update
    misha is pushing her
    encaging her to take a step ahead

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  52. Beautifully written. Can't wait for the next update... Can you please add me to your work. My India forum Id is bhartic71. Love your work. Thanks heaps!!!
    Bharti

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  53. oh crap!!!
    after his flirty talks Arnav was pissed she did not answer his texts

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  54. oh......lovely update.....
    Arnavjiii is angry.......cho choooo dnt worry khushi hena??? she will cool him.....hi hi hi nooo HOT him :D

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  55. oh god!
    these two are really childish.. why do they think the opposite about their thoughts??
    but khushi was at fault this time,,
    looking forward for next updates in maldives

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  56. O angry Arnav! Ab Khushi Arnav ko kaise manaayegi? [IF: Arshisarunfan]

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  57. so their relationship is facing teething problems eh?? ;D

    so who is gonna take the first step to overcome this hitch ? :D

    lovely update .....pls continue soon :)

    amus5

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  59. cute update .. the way he was msging her sure he not gone leave her in this trip

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  60. Lovely update...loved misha and khushi's bonding a lot...arnav's flirty msgs were just sizzling hot...lol...both r falling for each other but still not ready to admit...i am already dreaming what will happen in these three days between them...eagerly waiting for more....continue sooooooooooooooooon....

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  61. Hey dear hi I m orchids8888 from India forums.

    Mind blowing update dear.

    The bond between Misha and Khushi is beautiful.
    Wow I loved Arnav's flirtatious messages. Arnav is too grumpy and angry on Khushi. Hope so Khushi makes up soon and does not try his patience for longer. Really hope Khushi is able to woo back Arnav soon.

    Eager to read Arshi's hot and passionate love making session. Please dear continue soon.

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  62. hi yaar this is aarushh||
    lovely update yaar.....loved the way how arnav get jealous....
    nice update yaar.....cant wait for next one...hope the arnav mood changes soon.......

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  63. I loved the chapter…beautifully written…
    I love her name “Cookie”…bond between Khushi and Misha is very strong…
    Loved his flirty messages…he is too good.,,
    Arnav is angry…hope she will make it soon.
    Awesome update..


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  64. Awesome update.....


    waiting 2 read more.....

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  65. Awww,aag dono taraf lagi hai...
    ~ rockingsoni IF ~

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  66. soooooooooooooooo cute. arnav angry hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
    tough tme for khushi.

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  67. Why did he ask her if she is a lesbian? Loved his flirty messages.didn't do any work all day except texting KH,Mr.Raizada?u buy the sexy outfits u want to see her in,cos she wears only conservative clothes,Arnav.KH do something unthinkable,like naughty,romantic,funny,sexy to him,he will forgive u.thanks,appy, enjoyed the update.

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  68. Mr. Grumpy Singh Raizada is 1 tough nut 2 crack... Khushi is gonna hv a tuf tym wid him... Though d more tuf d more insense ;) N I luv ur INTENSE updates APPY... Waiting 4 nxt WILD move of Arnav...

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  69. Awesome update!!!

    Arnav being flirty in the messages,so cute!! Now he is upset that she didn't respond,now lets see how she makes it up to him...
    Update soon
    ~hawa1997~IF

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  70. Beautiful update.....
    Loved it soo much.....
    Misha n khushi shares a gre8 bond....
    Aww arnie is angry.....
    Cant wait for nxt part......
    nimal1992

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  71. awesome i guess he is going to be very angry and going to show thorugh his wild love making session in the private jet that is the reason he made this change of travelling by his private jet. khushi has it, now she has to face. loved the bonding of misha and khushi. cant wait to read the next part. (laksh65)

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  72. Awww...someone is angry and J too...khushi get ready to please ur first man,u need to work out a lot... :P
    mind blowing update Appy.. :)(Aryancha)

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  73. being grumpy nw r we raizada??? well u deserve this right thoda manana toh banta hai
    IF user dishashah4176

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  74. oh ho a J ASR... tht is always a treat to my eyes :D... lovely

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  75. really a grumpy A.S.R.

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  76. fabulous mind blowing

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  77. aweewee!!! fantastic update!!! loved it girl!! really lookin forward to see whats up for the trip!!
    PS - the msges were AWESOME!!! ;)

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  78. awwww....me too lovd d flirty arnav...

    he was so cute...

    bt angry arnav...khushi is gonna hav though tym i gss...

    update soon..

    if rimzu

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  79. wow!!!so romantic msges....arnav damn angry.....khushi hav to really work hard to manaofy him....continue sooon.....
    ushankitvc

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  80. Awesome update, especially Arnav, OMG, he was just so seemingly real.. great job of an udpate Appy- Prassu

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  81. great chapter

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  82. Enjoying to the max

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  83. Wow wow wow.....
    She ignored him....unintentionally.....anr now he is ANGRY and upset......
    Wonderful update.....

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  84. heyyy appy....this is arnshiiii....this ff is FABB!!!
    pls update sooon....
    want see what happens in maldieves and MORE OF FLRTY ARNAV PLS
    just loved the texts of arnie...
    PLS UPDATE SOOON

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  85. Awwww it was cute. I couldn't stop smiling when reading this update...

    Waiting for the next one

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  86. That was an amazinggg update!!!

    A flirty arnav is rare to read and is too much fun to read

    And enjoyed those flirty messages too that towards ebd became grumpy like him

    Now time fr khushi to pacify him
    Loved reading it to bits!!!

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  88. Loved it.. so how is khushi going to calm down this angry young man... ooohhh. fireworks await

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  89. lovely.. waiting for fireworks next

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  90. Hi Appy....

    love this flirty Arnav much....

    both r emotionally bonded unkowningly, expecting things from each other....

    tounge tied only coz of their No strings attached agreement....

    poor souls, they donno, they r destined to be together....

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  91. Loved the update
    Omg arnav is angry that kushi didnt hug him i hope she realises why hes so pissed and hugs him real tight.

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  92. Love the way you bring out Arnav's personality......Brillant!

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  93. loved the change in his behaviour...

    I really loved this grumpy raizada............

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  94. Hi Appy,
    Can you please provide me access to your restricted blog PAWN. My gmail ID is chhabrabharti1984@gmail.com. I will be highly obliged to you for this favour. Thanks heaps!!! Bharti

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  95. loved all the flirty texts

    no one wants to take the first step

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  96. Loved the change in both of their feelings thought both are good at hiding it. I have always loved an angry Arnav.

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  97. i love u a lot grumpy raizada:):p

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  98. Arnav's flirty messages...*blush*
    awe...misha-khushi bond...<3
    soul sisters....
    I just love this flirty raizada...<3

    ~anamika90

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  99. awesome update looks like khushi has to woo him back. please update soon. sorry for the mistakes in above reply, it was due to my touchpad.

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  100. awww... hes sooo pissed.. his txt msgs wer sooooo yumm..!!!
    she shud make it up to him now ASAP..!!!
    yusam :-)

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  101. So Mr.Arnav Singh Raizada is angry. Khushi teri kya haal hogi.

    Awesome update

    bluesobti IF

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  102. Lovely update

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  103. awesum update very well written but there unsaid words n unknow emotion which they share btwn them they start as no string attach but expect evrry thing wat couple in love do n how much i like it misha n khushi bonding is so beautiful. roshaan IF

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  104. love khushi and misha bonding

    arnav's text.. love them

    aww... jealous arnav as he didn't get her attention...

    awesome update as always appy

    continue soon

    jas0308 -IF

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  105. Loved the update, enjoyed all his flirty talks, first time he being ignore, could not help laughing. Loved her friendship with Misha. She is a true friend. From Khushi stand I totally get her here, Arnav should not be angry but this is the first time he is liking some one. Nice update

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  106. awesome update loved the talks
    Yasmeen_Tunio(IF)

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  107. Loved it. The messages took a u turn for sure.

    -desisweetheart9 from IF.

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  108. I thing if arnav is only khushi's husband ????????? anyway lved the update

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  109. OMG loved it...confusing at times....

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  110. wow ..... just wow,
    loved the msg part .... hmm Mr Raizada for the first time being ignored, but loved the roller coster of emotions going on , on both side....
    very cute....
    EAGERLY WAITING FOR THE NXT UPDATE!!!!!

    ~naturelove

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  111. when ru going to update:(

    waiting eagerly

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  112. When are you going to update....waiting eagerly...

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  113. stalkinggggggg!! waiting for d next update eagerly appy.......

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  114. when will you update next ??

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  115. hey are you still busy with the novel ?? i really miss to read your SS :(

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  116. waiting 4 ur update dear...........

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