He ran his finger
along is long-strands of hair.
He was frustrated.
He was suffocated.
His di was making his
life all difficult.
Arnav Singh Raizada
never ever wanted to get married.
For him marriage is a
stupid constitution with binds two people unnecessarily. Some doesnot have a
choice but to obey it for the lifetime. Some drifts apart if their mentality
doesnot match. He was not a person of commitment for life time. If he likes
someone he make sure he gets her on bed. Few days, maybe few month he enjoys.
Later a goodbye from his side if the girl tries to act all emotional.
He hates emotions.
He hates love.
he hates to be loved.
He hates
complications.
He hates to feel.
He hates to be ruled.
He loves freedom.
He makes sure he
throws anything and everything when it comes to love. He hated every girl who
are cry babies.
He was known to be
the biggest casenova. No girl, no girl could ever get away from his charm. His
one stare made their panties wet. His one touch was capable of melting that
girl in his arms. And the ones who had him on bed have enjoyed their lifetime
treat and the most unforgettable event in their life.
Unlike those girls
Arnav Singh Raizada have never met anybody in his life who had hold him back on
place and tickled his hormones to want her for more.
**
Angrily he punched
come keys tabbing on his iphone.
“at this hour?” came
the straight reply.
“Le Meridian. Room no
143”.
“hmm! Will be late
got some work lined up. You should have informed me a little before. I could
have postponed those meetings.” she sighed.
“take you time. But dont
make me wait long”.
“Di?” she questioned
sensing his frustration the way he spoke to her
“hmm” was his reply.
“Marriage thingy?”
she asked as if she could read Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada’s crocked mind.
“Don’t be late”.
“looks like I am
going to limp tomorrow”, he could sense her mocking laugh.
“See you Khushi!”.
Khushi Kumari Gupta was the girl in his life who stuck to him
for more than 6 months now. And this something to think about it.
Another heart breaking story Appy....Khushi just as her fucking mate....
ReplyDeleteHa haan beta tadpa le teasers de deke......yaaar ab tu iska next part kb post karegi...i cannt wait...jaldi post kr phleaz fr god sake.....the title bahhahaha itna funny...title hi matured h....good going....waise appy....maine h na kal BFTW reread kiya.....uske bd one night stand one....uske bad forbidden desire nd pawn frm start....wat i have noticed is ur writing is really growing at sch a speed....the way u hv writen stories consequently is really really becoming professional......i guess u hv stopped givin any mature content at if....coz f ur recent writer's block.....? I know many f ur readers want the spice back.....nywayz i hope this satisfies them....if user anya_maheshwari
ReplyDeleteWell. No dear writer's block was not really for that... Thanks a ton first of all complimenting... As a writer it is definately boast ur confidence... This story has whole lot of matured content to bring the feel of it... So planned to keep it in the blog only
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ReplyDeleteBut i hope its not dark
If it is inform us before we start keeping hopes for happily ever after haha
No it Is not at all dark...you will know it from the prologue... Its easy going and little bit of intense...khushi is different from all other khushis I wrote till date.
DeleteAwesome.. Looking forward for it!
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Deleteoh boy......there goes on more addition to my list of your FFs that I keep checking for updates :). You have great writing skills. I read Shall we and ONS more than 2 times so far. Story lines on opposite sides of the spectrum but I love them. Initially, I missed watching IPKKND everyday. not anymore as I m addicted to read the chapters of ur FF. Yeah, I did say addiction.
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Anything you write becomes an epic story just like Midas touch
ReplyDeleteLove it!
ReplyDeleteInteresting,want to read it!
All your work are masterpiece!!!!!
Interesting concept
ReplyDeleteLoved it
Continue soon
Amazing teaser. Much curious to read your stories as u r the best writer
ReplyDeleteI love your stories pawn and forbidden desire.
Hmmm loved th title FUCKMATES <3
Please update supper soon
And do add me to your other blogs as I am newbie
Interesting start....
ReplyDeleteLooking forward for it.....
wow
ReplyDeleteinteresting....
looking forward for it....
plz continue soon....
Wow teaser is really interesting n it teased me a lot diii so update the chapters soon
ReplyDeleteI fall for this ss just by reading the teaser u rock diii eagerly eagerly waiting for the next part n also hoping arnav n khushi will always b together in this ff
i so love you appy for writing such amazing stories. ur simply the best *hugs*
ReplyDeleteits fabulous *claps*waiting for ur next update :)
Loved it Appy..
ReplyDeleteAnother interesting one..
can't wait for next update
exciting teaser.... u always write something unique and special...... here is no difference.....
ReplyDeleteu have left ur unique touch in it also..... seems like it going to be another awesome one......
loved it
Looking forward to it. But our dear old Khushi as a fucking mate? (IF: Arshisarunfan)
ReplyDeletefrom the teaser i guess it looks like that :D
DeleteNice title!!!
ReplyDeleteawsmmmmmm.......continue soon
ReplyDeleteparo di .... new ff........
ReplyDeleteits different as its name reveal.......lol....
so here arnav allergic to marriage...
khushi fucking him till 6 months.....
i think here khushi is too bold......
waiting fr prologue to know more....
update soon......
- Akorshi -
di plz make a dashing banner of ur arnav khushi..
Deleteon this ss......
Strange bold title. Waiting to be revealed more
ReplyDeletewell u may find me weird but truly speaking am commenting before reading well am sure it'll be awesome n I guess hell lot of Boldness awaits me so without losing time let me check it out :)
ReplyDeletevery bold one, but first time coming across bold khushi
ReplyDeleteso she is married and has past
waiting from u to share more
thanks for pm
(ITS_LEENA -IF)
what khushi is the fuckmate :O hmmmm would like to read more
ReplyDeleteWow another interesting story:-)) you are such a good writer.. I just love your stories... Can't wait to read more:-))
ReplyDeleteVery interesting teaser, Appy! Looks like this SS will be packed with a lot of heat and passion! This Khushi sounds so bold! And did you say ASR is the biggest Casanova? Can't wait!! I'm very curious as where your creativity is going to take us! Looking forward to reading more! Thank you so much!
ReplyDeleteAPPY SNAPPY ...INTENSE I SAY ...GOOD ONE
ReplyDeleteTHANKS
KKKA
Just loved the teaser dear ! Will follow it nw !
ReplyDeleteAwesome teaser....
ReplyDeleteI guess it totally different story....
Eagerly waiting for update....
nice teaser...i guess it will be amazimg story..becouse you are the writer..:).... waiting for update
ReplyDeleteawesome....update
ReplyDeleteits is different concept...interesting.....
from jenji08
interesting.............
ReplyDeleteNew and different concept. I'm already loving it can't wait to read more
ReplyDeleteHi! Sorry for the delay, away seems nice. Looking forward to read more! So Khushi and Arnav are already in a relationship, if you call that a relationship! And she have been with him for six months, wow!
ReplyDeleteIF OPSYELLOW
New story I'm super excited
ReplyDeletecan't wait to read more ;)
interesting start continue soon please
and thank u for pm me
APPY another one !
ReplyDeleteI think i am already loving this new Khushi to be honest i had expected it to be La
vandana73
ASR charm is on full swing!
ReplyDeleteKKG has no chance whatsoever.
The only chance she has is her grip over him for her to utilize!
Nice update Appy!
Loved it!
really appy u r super fabulous.....this ff r amezing mindblowing...i eagerly waiting to ur update...
ReplyDeletenice teaser and concept. just started reading.. Will have to finish it up fast hmm...
ReplyDeleteinteresting concept..just start reading..
ReplyDeleteInteresting start to the story. Gonna read all updates and add a comment after each.
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ReplyDeletewow amazing teaser
ReplyDeletegot ur blog link from twitter
will read all the parts and then comment
love reading ur stories ....
Thanks Appy Ji for the PM with the blog link to your new SS 'The Charmer and his Lady', really appreciate it!!!!
ReplyDeleteI really like the teaser, it's an interesting concept and very different from your other stories.
But one things for sure this is also going to be a great hit just like your other FF and SS's!!!!
I'm looking forward to reading the other chapters you have written!!!
Keep up the good work!!!
(IF User: sabz105)
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ReplyDeletehey i just received saw your PM on indian forums..nice teaser and now I am going to read all the parts..
ReplyDeleteIF : pearls09
awesum teaser....would like to read more of it...
ReplyDeleteushankitvc
Thanks for your blog link...i AM reading now the missed parts....
ReplyDeleteI will update my comment at each chapter.
AWESOME START LOVED IT THANKS FOR THE PM
ReplyDeleteNice teaser.
ReplyDelete-desisweetheart9 from IF.
Loved commitment phobic Arshi, continue your awesome writing.I am your fan for life
ReplyDeleteAlready loving the teaser.. sorry m late! Up to chapter 1
ReplyDelete,
interesting teaser... since the unedited version is on the blog, i think i will read it here :)))
ReplyDeletebtw loved the look of ur blof <3
-cherry227
lvd reading it!
ReplyDeletevery interesting
vud like 2 read furthr
nice teaser
ReplyDeleteFantastic update, Appy! Yes, you are evil for leaving us with a cliffhanger! We are dying to know about Khushi's hubby and Arnav's wife! Still hoping that they are married to each other! Please update soon! I appreciate all your time and efforts. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteWow that teaser is very promising.So looking forward to read more
ReplyDeletemmm, i wonder what the relationship between our favorite couple is. sounds very interesting.
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