Part 9
Turmoil
Arnav grumpily moved
towards the poolside feeling frustrated about their incomplete act. He ran his
long fingers in between his hair and took long steps towards the open area.
This was one area he
loved the most in his house. The area where he can relax and drain down his
anxiety.
The Pool side.
It was a huge area
covered with lush green grasses. The path was paved with grabbles which leaded
to a huge pool. The pool area was covered with glass façade so that the it is
illuminated with natural light during the day time and have the huge view of
his vast estate while relaxing in the pool. The heated pool also had central
heating system, which was effective during winter season. An attached bar
served him the finest alcohols specially selected by him during his journey
broad.
It was one Arnav’s
private place and no one was allowed to servents were allowed to enter when he
was inside.
Arnav threw his
closes and removed the last piece of his clothing on the floor and dived inside
the cool water.
After swimming full
length of the pool he got up and made himself a drink. Sipping in one go he
made another one and took it near the pool.
**
Resting his head on
the edge of the floor and immersing himself in the water Arnav closed his eyes
and took a deep breadth.
“I am a virgin”, her words still echoing in his mind.
Arnav turned towards
the floor and again gulped down the whole red wine in one go.
“crap!” he slapped
the water splashing it with a hard thud.
“Why Arnav Why? Why
did you expect her to be different?” he mentally cursed her.
“Every girl is same.
Just their way of attracting men are different. But all woman are same. This
girl is also no different”, he threw the glass and broke into pieces.
“damn it!”
“but why the hell are
you so angry? So what she is pretending? As if you are going to keep her with
you forever? Come on dude? forgot your motto? Arnav Singh Raizada will never
marry a girl. He will never give any girl his surname. Never. NEVER EVER”.
“but out of all the
people why? Why did Khushi pretend? I thought at least she is transparent. Well
it is another seekh (learning) for you”.
“I don’t care if she
is virgin or not. Why should I be bothered? Not that I have forced her to be
with me? She herself has agreed to be my girl-friend. Who cares who is her
husband and why should I get effected whether she is truthful or not. I should
mind my own business that’s it. I have wasted my time on her and I will not
waste anymore”.
Enjoy
Fuck
The End.
Bas!
He dipped himself
inside the pool and swim the full length underwater.
The moment he touched
picked his head up from the water he saw Khushi standing near the door way.
One word
BEAUTIFUL
Her hair ruffled and
skin to her skin, the white fabric of her long frock giving her an angelic
look. He clean, fresh face sending tingling sensation inside his tummy. And her
swollen lips awaking his desire once again.
“how can someone
manage to look so beautiful all the time? And why is this female hell bend on
showing herself simple? Was she really this much simple? Or is it a part of her
seduction? Whatever it is, she knows her job well it looks and she is the
master of seduction.
“Hi!” she said in a
low voice.
“Want some drinks?
Help yourself”.
“I don’t drink.
Thanks but”.
Arnav let out a
mocking tone and said, well Miss Gupta looks like you are hell bend on proving
something.
Khushi narrowed her
brows and looked at him, “what do you mean?”
“Nothing, I have soft
drinks in the refrigerator, if you want have some”.
Khushi went towards
the bar counter and poured some coke for herself in a wine glass.
Khushi kept looking
at Arnav who was now taking a lap to come to the bar side while sipping her
coke.
“should I get you
something?” she asked.
Panting heavily he
replied, “a glass of red wine please”.
“sure!” Khushi said
and took his glass which was kept on the glass-tiled flooring and pour the red
wine form the bottle from the table.
Handing over the
glass to him she sat on the side of the pool dipping her legs.
“so, Miss gupta! Have
you gone through the project file?” Arnav sipped his wine and chuckled.
“Miss Gupta?” she thought. “Why was he acting so formal suddenly?”
“can I join you
inside the pool?”
Arnav cocked his
right eyebrows and checked her out. “like this?”
Khushi checked her
dress and bit her lips. I haven’t brought any swim suit. I did not know you
have a pool.
Arnav without further
delay pulled her leg and khushi slipped inside the water.
Arnav held her
dangerously close to him and that’s when Khushi came in contact with his broad
masculine chest. He was not shaved. She noted. This dark brown hair in his
chest made him look more manly and irresistible. He could feel her nipples
pricking his chest through her dress and her lips parted anticipating his next
move.
“Why so much pretends
miss gupta?” he couldnot help anymore but to ask. He himself was shocked by his
behaviour. No matter now much he prepared himself not to ask, but he failed
miserably.
“pretend? Pretend
what Arnav?”
“Oh come on babes”
“I am not getting you
Arnav. What are you talking about?” Khushi held her chest while she spoke.
“Pretend that you are
naïve, untouched” Arnav pushed her a little and turned to gulp down his wine.
Khushi stopped him
and turned him towards her.
She knew she is not
answerable to him. It was her personal thing and why would she explain him? And
for what? This relationship has no future. None of them expect any long term
relationship out of this. And even if this is long term they are both aware of
why they were together. It was only sexual attracting nothing else. He wanted
to satisfy his hunger and she wanted to take revenge on her husband by moving
now showing him that she is not a fool to wait for him for her entire life.
But despite of the
reality she chose to tell him, “I am not pretending. I am untouched”.
Arnav stared at her
for few seconds. His heart wanting to believe what she was saying but his mind
refused to accept.
“I have never shared
a bed with my husband. He never touched me”. Khushi dindot want to make fool
out of herself. She did not want to tell that like a stupid she waited of her
man for 20 years who never showed up. She did not wanted to be a laughing stock
in front of him. She carefully hid the truth but she did not lie to Arnav.
“its upto you whether
you want to believe or not. And I am sure you will know that what I am saying
is the truth in due course of time. This is something I cannot hide or
pretend”.
“what about
boyfriends? Never had any?”
“you are my first”
she said holding her chin up.
Now that statement
was enough for Arnav to get aroused once again. Isnt that what he wanted few
minutes back when he was all over her?
He did not know why
he felt special suddenly. He did not know why her virginity turned him on more.
He did not know why he felt proud of himself for being the first for her.
He pulled her in his
embrace and kissed her passionately.
**
OMG AMAZING UPDATE <3
ReplyDeleteI loved the things Arnav was thinking <3 he is so right about it..
Loved it..very nicely written..and end was dazzling.
~Vani
vani di u r no less...... u both appy di n u competet well n m just a gone case fr u both
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ReplyDeletewow i got to read 2 updates together *(happy dance)*
ReplyDeletewell coming to the previous update i liked the way khushi viewed the note written by arnav....that was a pleasant indetail writing also the way her emotions were expressed while going around the bathroom - showed the gentle thoughts of khushi
lovly
in todays' update the turmoil of arnav well portrayed in fact it shows his inner feelings of mistrust to women(with deception) with whom he has dated....and he sudden urge to feel special towards khushi was well brought out with the entire poolside play
enjoyed it ......pls continue soon
amus5
Fabulous update...
ReplyDeleteArnav should feel special cause Khushi is giving him her most precious asset..
I think Khushi is doing the right thing by moving on.. Why should she wait for her jerk husband for whom she has already waisted her 20 years..
Loved it.
ReplyDeleteWow Awesome yar
ReplyDeleteArnav thinking is right in his way
But i Love this khushi yar her Confidence loved it
Being First Arnav is celebrating in heart
waiting for next....!
Again one word awesomeeeeee and awesomiesttt for u
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ReplyDeleteWow I m so happy dear that I got to read 2 parts in a row. M so happy.
Coming to the update, Arnav's turmoil was well portrayed. Till date he has come across women who are fake, so its hard to believe for him that Khushi is still a virgin and also she is not faking it. whatever she is saying is true.
Eagerly waiting for the next part. I hope Arnav and Khushi consummate in next update. Continue soon. Waiting for a super hot update.
amazing update!
ReplyDeleteamazing part............
ReplyDeleteWow 2 updates in a day... Day by day I loving khushi character yaar.. Such a bold personality... Serves right for arnav... Loved the update
ReplyDeleteOops updates..
DeleteOMG OMG OMG
ReplyDeletesimply one word...
PERFECT.....
superb update yar......
now i think Arnav will be more happy....
plz update soon
So much jealousy,happiness....
ReplyDeleteasr demanding answers and khushi giving answers.
arnt they expecting more from eachother unknowingly
sumu
haha! ;) they are two crazy duffer couple
Deletei had juz read til chptr 2..
ReplyDeleteafta dt..no pm n no mail abt d updtes..:P
was juz goin thru d blog n realizd dt sooo many chptrs hav been updted..
soo...dey r nw in 4 it..
Khushi has moved on in her lyf..n z tryin 2 liv n njoi her lyf..
her husbnd dint cum..
who's it?
bby any chnce z it Arnav?
20 yrs ...sooo may b dey hav sum pastwell..
Arnav z njoin her company..n so z she..
no xpctations n no demands..
dey bth wnts d same thing..n she's ready 2 giv it..
bt he has 2 no abt her past evn,,wish she wud tel him..:P
she dsnt wnt ne personal question..
i hope dey wud sttle dwn slowly n slwly..:)
doo mail me wen u updte or..dooo pm..:)
mail id..yaa dis 1 only..its *reallyhappyy@gmail.com*
awesome ,awesome and simply awesome...loving it to the core ...u r absolutely amazing appy,love u
ReplyDeleteIT WAS PERFECT. LOVED IT:) (IF:Arshisarunfan)
ReplyDeleteAWESUM.... Finally he wil cum 2 knw at her truth... He wntd her 2 b diff 4m others n indeed shez d 1... <3 <3 <3 Waiting 4 nxt part...
ReplyDeletearnav is feeling guilty to have sex with her being a virgin at the same time he cannot believe that such a beautiful woman is not touched at all despite being married, even by her husband. awesome interesting, waiting to read the next chapter. (IF user id laksh65)
ReplyDeleteKhushi is so sure about her decisions.
ReplyDeleteI so loved how u portrayed arnav‘s turmoil n trust issues with women..
ReplyDeleten suddenly how spl he felt when khushi said he was her first one
Awesome...
ReplyDeletehe is feeling happy to be her first... isn't it more than attraction... ;)
waaao awesome...:)
ReplyDeleteAmazing
ReplyDeleteperfect n beautiful
ReplyDeletethnks appy
Superb.... It's just perfect...
ReplyDeleteJust love it...
Oh my god.. u r just awesome...
Thanks a lot for two updates in day...
wow loved d update.....
ReplyDeleteawesome.....
very well written....
cntinue soon....
nirmal1992
superb..
ReplyDeletejust loved it..
awesome update.
ReplyDeleteawesome update.evrrything crystal clear.
ReplyDeleteOhh again an update wowww
ReplyDeleteLoved it as usual
amazing update....!
ReplyDeleteSo arnie boy is thinking differently abt dis girl though he is trying hard to bhave like he is simply there wit her for physical attraction but still he cannot help himslf nd finally he asked her how d hell she can b a virgin even being married....!
Boy,agree it u feel sumthng different for dis innocent girl nd khushi who nvr thought to unfold her personal issues in front of arnav said it dat she is actually a virgin....hmmm nice nice....both r treating each other differently witout even knwing it....
Beautifully written di....
Simply fabulous....!
I totally loved it....!
read two chapters together..loving the way story is moving....awesome dear....
ReplyDeletenishu_shorna(from IF)
loved the update
ReplyDeleteamazing update..!!
ReplyDeleteloved how Khushi is always so simple...
and Arnav...not in love...but possessive about his lady...
interesting..!!
wow! awesome part......
ReplyDeletearnav have bad past...that's why he behaved like this with khushi..
arnav asked her...khushi replied patiently...arnav more exciting to act now...yes he is dam happy...he is her first....
update soon......
both of them are trying to pretend that here in this relationship no strings attached ....... but unconsciously slowly slowly they are actually falling for each other.... WOW.... her being untouched having a great affect on Arnav..... Loved it .... Awesome
ReplyDeleteloved all the updates. Both of them are falling badly for each other. Its way beyond sexual desire shaping into something meaningful.
ReplyDeleteWhy I have a feeling Arnav is Khushi's bachpan ka pyar or her husband.
jst read ur ff..i lovd it..wat a story..pls update soon..n pls pm me whn u update..
ReplyDeletewow awesome
ReplyDeletewhen is the next update???
ReplyDeleteloved it
read everything in one go
luvbarunsanaya6
nice update,got 2 see a glimpse of arnav's feelings 2wards love,relationships,girls etc.But dont understand why men even after being wth so many girls wish 2 the first of their spl lady??????
ReplyDeleteIt was awesome..loved it
ReplyDeleteAwwww So nice Arnav believed Khushi. Happy. SO is coming ?????
ReplyDeleteFor Khushi this started out as revenge against her husband and for Arnav sexual desire
ReplyDeleteArnav wished he was her first and now he is getting his wish
Now they are both falling for each other unknowingly
cant wait to read what happens next
OMG..!! Just afraid that Arnav might hurt her.. His tongue sometimes..!! But can't blame him entirely. Atleast they are BACK again.. :) :D
ReplyDeletepepples_joy
OMG. Amazing update
ReplyDeleteawesome update!! arnav started feeling for her like he is happy that her husband didnt touch her.... cant wait for next part
ReplyDeleteawsome update !! cant wait for next part...
ReplyDeleteWow wow wow eagerly waiting for the next part
ReplyDeleteArnav has so many issues man.... he wants it.. he doesn't believes anyone... great update. .. love it
ReplyDeleteAwesome update.Arnav's inner turmoil proves that not only physically but also emotionally he is attracted to khushi.can't wait for next update .;)
ReplyDeletebeautifully written
ReplyDeleteliked the way she spoke to misha, how she wants to be herself no matter what
her behavior towards mohan, simply adorable, loved the way she took the note and felt it
arnavs mind and heart in turmoil to believe or not, loved the way she confronted him saying he would get to know
thanks for pm dear
ITS_LEENA - IF
Amazing update............he is fighting within himself.........Thanks for the PM
ReplyDeleteWow awesome update Appy.
ReplyDeleteYou Rock \m/ Gal
Loved it
ReplyDeleterohinid if
wooowww amazing one yet again...
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Swati (IF id - swatim318)
awesome update
ReplyDeletethanks!
lakshyaNkt
amazing update
ReplyDeleteloved it
he really want khushi to be different
and he pround that he is her first
awesom update appy
ReplyDeleteawesom update appy
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ReplyDeleteawesom update Appy
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ReplyDeleteFabulous updates.. Is Khushi married during her childhood itself and she is still waiting for her friend-cum-husband for the past 20 years or is it that they had been in love since childhood and after marriage he left her.. Arnav doesn't believe Khushi when she said she is a Virgin..why? He could sense that but still why he couldn't accept that she is telling the truth..Both of them are equally attracted and falling for each other, thought they don't want to claim, for Khushi this started out as revenge against her husband and for Arnav sexual desire. Arnav wished he was her first and now he is getting his wish, and I'm sure he will be elated when he witnesses the truth....Would this intimacy between them take their relationship to the next level....curiously waiting to see that happen.. - Reality Truth ( IF User )
Appy .. read ur FF all in one go..
ReplyDeletei really really liked it...
its somehow different from the rest of ur work..
i liked the Khushi u have in this ...
will stalk this blog from now on!! :)
thanks for the update!
~Leena
IF ID LeenaRocks
lovely update as usual appy!
ReplyDeleteugh.....lovely...bit left me wanting for more!!!!
ReplyDeletejust cant resist this ss u r writing!! its awesome to see how happy he is to be khushis 1st...hehe...definitely not how ASR is supposed to react, but it was cute!! and ofcourse, waiting impatiently to read their 1st encounter!! ;) :p
she s waited for 20years *shock*
ReplyDeleteread the three updates...fabulous updates dear *claps*
sorry for late reply dear...was not able to come online
update the next soon dear:)
wow the story is going really nice. just finished reading 7,8 and 9. awesome parts. can't wait.
ReplyDeletewow the story is going really nice. just finished reading 7,8 and 9. awesome parts. can't wait.
ReplyDeleteAwesome update.
ReplyDeleteKhushi was being truthful and Arnav it seems has believed her.
The last where he hugs her is sweet.
awesome update
ReplyDeleteupdt soon
summaiyasayed
Amazing Update...Just Love it!!
ReplyDeleteAwesome update
ReplyDeletefantastic update
ReplyDeleteloved it
-drunkiiebabe-
Awesome update
ReplyDeleteLoving the way the story is progressing
Nice update .
ReplyDeleteWonderful update!!
ReplyDeleteArnav's POV is superb!!
Beautifully written!
Hey I read all the chapters in one go... You are one amazing writer and write passionate chapters which grip the audiences and leave them panting for me. I am hooked on to this story and closely follow all your writings on IF and your blogs....
ReplyDeleteWaiting for the next chapter..
ths....Rakhee
Just read the whole 1-9 parts. It was awesome!!! Different that usual. Loving it, can't wait to know more.
ReplyDeleteBlablabla_mo7 IF
Fabulous update! Arnav is just in turmoil! In general, he is very cynical about relationships! Yet, in his heart he knows Khushi is different but his mind is the opposite! I'm so glad they talked and try to clear the air! Khushi is right because Arnav will learn the truth about her virginity! He is so flattered that he will be her first! Thank you!! Eagerly waiting for part 10!
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ReplyDeletehey
ReplyDeleteAWESOME STORY
LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT
damn arnav is falling for her rather i wod say he has :p :p
ReplyDeletegreat job :D
Hey,
ReplyDeleteAmti4u here... Thank you for the Pm and the linkss...
Loved th whole update...actually, I am reading from 2nd chapter onwards just now, and I absolutely loved this Charmer and his ladyy... Now, that he got to know that she is untouched, there wont be any stopping...*gutter mind*... Loved it
OMG ... ts is just superb..
ReplyDeletejust read all chapters in one go...
hayeeee loved it so much..
Arnav and khusi both r really duffer.. they r pretending tht they cant affect each other.. but unknowingly they r falling more and more for each other.. Now Arnav knew she is virgin ahem ahem... now what is going to happen between them??? already imagining .. Rofllll.. waiting for next update.. Thank u so much appy for pm..
Bhagawati - IF
I just love this Khushi who is so herself...she does not feel the need to justify herself to anyone. I like that aspect.
ReplyDeleteArnav too is complicated.....this story is just sooooo interesting.
They have chemistry for sure...
2 confuse souls!!-------------they r unknowingly doing eat they dont wish to do ever........interesting..!!
ReplyDeleteso the journey has started wid the hidden expectations and explanations from their "no string attachment"................;)
Nice update! He is not the husband she has been waiting for, is he? Cause this will definitely create a wall between them as he will think she tricked him in accepting her . . . Well he got his wish to be her first, hope he does appreciate it and shows her some love . . . .
ReplyDeleteOMG That was fab
ReplyDeleteso Arnav knows That he will be her 1st n he likes it
thanks for pm plz keep em comin. n continue soon
Wow fab update dii....
ReplyDeleteWaiting eagerly for the future updates....
SUPER DUPER...Appy pls do continue fast...this is incredibly fantastic...loved it to bits
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ReplyDeleteamazing fabulous update super awesome will the hot session be held in the poool :) ehehhe
Omg.omg..
ReplyDeletethis story is just mind blowing..
fantabulous.
loved it..
arniepervaiz
awesum updt...poor confused arnav...loved their convo...ooops she waited fr hr hubby fr 20 yrs...she better move on...looks like a passionate updt cuming up...would love to read it...continue sooon...
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amaziiiing i love it
ReplyDeleteloving ittt!!! and this very reason will be why arnav will fall in love with her!!! but dont make it soooon!!!
ReplyDeletemake it wayyyy longgg =D
Loved ittt!!!
ReplyDeleteLove_SA from IF
Read this ff all in one go... Like the confident Khusi who is ready to take decisions keeping her happiness in mind.
ReplyDeleteArnav contempt and mistrust of his previous girlfriends is beautifully portrayed though Khusi is affecting him :) he is happy to be her first
Will wait for your next update
Poonam
IF - paaskhanna
omg,loved it.
ReplyDeleteMISTIE,IF
Loved it
ReplyDelete-Sadi-
Read all chaps in one go....
ReplyDeleteUfffff.....
They were ah.mazing.....
I am literally dead....
Oh gosh....
IF.....anamika90
awesome update
ReplyDeleteloved it
finally read all missing updates.. thanks appy for the link
ReplyDeleteamazing updates... loved it
they both are attracted to each other...
arnav is feeling different toward her, a new sensation.. he should be proud that he is her first one
who is khushi's husband?? reveal the mystery soon
jas0308 (IF)
I have read almost all your works n I must say this outstands all other works of urs
ReplyDeleteI got this link long back from you but just now got time to read all the chapters in one go...
loved Ur work :)
keep writing :)
have read almost all your works n I must say this outstands all other works of urs
ReplyDeleteI got this link long back from you but just now got time to read all the chapters in one go...
loved Ur work :)
keep writing :)
thanks
Shalu
Oh my! Amazing update! Is arnav the husband khushi waited for? Interesting!
ReplyDeleteOMG APPY i love it...pehle toh ur lovelyy FF..Forbidden Desire its hell awsome n i love this new one...beautifully written:)
ReplyDeleteMy first reaction is always...Uff APPY...how can you write sooo much?
Very nice FF...you described the full range of emotions ARHI went through superbly.....I read all the parts in one go..
AROOSHEE
Awesome update .... Arnav started to feel spl abt her ....Who is khushi husband ???
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Totally loved this story.
ReplyDeleteActually I love all your story.
In this I am in love with Khushi, she is bold, independent, sensible, ready to take life as challenge.
I am looking forward to this story and exited.
Thanks for the link of the blog appy.
Archnahardik123 ( IF )
Amazing, please continue soon!!!
ReplyDelete~Dee~
Human especially male[mean]-minds ;) ..they always expect, admire, lust over the untouched one...
ReplyDeleteIt seems like the table is turn in this relationship! Arnav wants to know more about khushi then he need to know.
ReplyDeleteIf
Opsyellow
hi appy, sorry been a bit away for the last couple of days. but didnt miss much i see. 2 chapters only. well, ice update with hot and sizzling happenings and a little more about the past peeping through ;)
ReplyDeleteloved how u described their turmoils and expectations. i was like what the mood when arnav left her knowing she is virgin. i was saying "man, isnt that what u wanted even it sounded impossible?"
haha.. nice update
love all the chapters..amazing!! finally, khushi moved on..she is so honest..the emotions they went through was awesome
ReplyDeleteaww! poor khushi,she couldnt resist him.
fabulous!!
Finishing reading the nine parts...
ReplyDeleteawesome update...
thank you.
Beaytiful...!
ReplyDeleteThis story is definitely taking a new twist. i feel really sorry for Arnav. In French there is a saying that goes 'Tel qui est pris qui croyait prendre'. This is exactly what is happenning with ASR here!!
ReplyDeleteread it all in one go...i loved it..this khushi is so different...and i like that change..ASR has fallen for her no matter what.and khushi waited for her prince right?? so that means she never had feelings for her husband...then why did she marry him? only becoz of their parents?? this is so interesting sis..will wait for the next update :)
ReplyDeleteAmazing update…but why he is thinking she is pretending.
ReplyDeleteBeing the first one he is dancing inside his heart…lovely
Update soon….Appy!!!
Nice one waiting for next update
ReplyDeleteAwesome updates !!! read from 5 to 9 together.. Arnav is becoming bit possessive of Khushi it seems, first he wanted to be her first and when she told him, he felt she is pretending but in the end when she told me the reality he is happy to be her first.. what is happening to great Arnav Singh Raizada why all of sudden he is interested in some girl????
ReplyDeleteamazing updates !!!!! :)
ReplyDelete(aks555)
Update soon sis.. waitinggg
ReplyDeletei love dis ss appy...read all the 9 chapters in one go....u r again amazing....
ReplyDeleteNice update.....finally they had a conversation and everything got cleared...update soon...
ReplyDeleteAwesum update..arnav was little jealous..bt he wud never agree..he is unknowingly going towards marriage and long term relationship..he want to knw abt her..and she is answering his question too...waiting for next
ReplyDelete-nishi22 frm IF
Wonderful update.....they talked in a pool....nice environment.....soothing
ReplyDeleteBut I truly want to know what is Khushi past.....
Update next part soon.
OMG that was a awesome update .....
ReplyDeletelove the chapter .........
can't wait to read the next chapter and know whats gonna happen although my guttermind is active ........ lol.........
please update soon .............
IF: sweetvanie
DAMN HE WAS SURE SHE WAS PLAYING WITH HIM SO GLAD SHE SHOWED HER CONFIDENCE AND DID NOT BACK DOWN AWESOME UPDATE HE IS GETTING POSSESSIVE OF HER
ReplyDeletekitne din se koi update ni :(
ReplyDeletesikhni_ IF
read the update just today!
ReplyDeleteso arnav felt good knowing that khushi was truly a virgin!
why do I feel that he is the man whome khushi was married to!
very well, drafted.....
ReplyDeletethe emotions,were brought out efficiently......
i m a fan of ur words, the way u write... hatts off
~naturelove
DeleteRead all the last three updates in a go!!!
ReplyDeleteAmazinggg updates!!
Poor khushi, why wid her hubby/besties do this to her....i know story will unfold across its course
My first reaction when she told Abt her virginity was that arnav would hav done a happie dance mentally but wth he left
Arnav is already seem to be more effected than he actually thot...n I guess he myt fall in love
But khushi will never want to get married
Guess this is what story is abt
Its already so interesting!!!
Amazinggg update!!!
Robinhood008 IF
just read all the 9 parts
ReplyDeletewhy didn't arnav believe she was telling the truth
didn't he wanted to be her first??
but glad he accepted this
when will you get khushi's husband
n will now arshi take things forward
Amazing update..Well Arnav has some unknown feelings towards Khushi
ReplyDeletecontinue soon dear...
wowwwww.... the story is soooo gripping... i lorved it... arnav n khushi's relationship is awesome..
ReplyDeleteyusam
Please update! Can't wait dear!
ReplyDeleteFab. Khushi told him the truth.
ReplyDelete-desisweetheart9 from IF.
Plz update
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