Part 17
Making You Mine
And from that time onwards Arnav was all over his
girl-friend who also had no sign to leave him for one second. She took the
opportunity and felt him thought her fingers, hands, body, skin and with all
means. Khushi removing her shyness matched every step with her hungry, wild
boy-friend. Even their kisses reached another level. The only thing which was
left, was tearing off their respective clothes and make wild love with each
other, forgetting time, forgetting the place, forgetting everything they have in
their minds few minutes ago.
In the bathroom, on the seat there were no places left for
them where they did not feel each other. Their hands kneading each other at the
right places stimulating each other, their part thrashed with each other making
themselves aware of each other. It was simply fiery encounter, which even they
did not expect out of each other.
They both wear totally out of their breath but still did not
leave each other. The dominance in each move were pronounced.
“Umm” Arnav let out a frustrating groan not able to touch
her the way he wanted to, nude, wild, raw. “I cant wait anymore khushi, if you
tease me like this I swear I am not going to be one percent polite during our
first encounter” he said before catching her lower lips feeling her soft hand
massaging him on his hard form. “How is it going to be when she would touch
without any barrier” the very thought brought him to the verge of climax.
“Arnav! I am unable to control anything when it comes to
you” khushi confessed hopelessly but she did not feel sad, but took extreme
pride in confessing something that she felt. That’s how genuine she was with
him. Why to hide what she felt? Both of then knew whats their business so there
was no point in pretending. And It would have been a lie if she said the
opposite. Arnav was indeed one of the most handsome man, boyfriend a girl can
ever have. He not only looked good but his hands and fingers worked like a
magic. Just by his mare touch he could make any girl scream out in pleasure and
khushi was no different. The only difference was Arnav who seemed to be
terrifically attracted by Khushi. Maybe it was due to her untouched body, her
untouched soul gave her oomph! Factor and Khushi herself was deadly sexy below
her innocent mask. She hit the right nerve at the right time and her kiss acted
like a drug.
**
Arnav held Khushi’s hand and dragged her towards the cockpit
of the aircrapt. “Where are you taking me arnav?” Khushi asked holding his
hand, trying to ease the creases of her dress and brushing her messed up hair
due to their hot encounter.
“How about I show you how it looks when we decend down to my
bunglow?” Arnav wiggled his eyebrows towards Khushi, who stayed hell shocked.
“was he going to take her inside the cockpit?” the thought
itself was thrilling. Strangely the girl who hated take off loved landing. And
whatelse can be exciting other than seeing the runway ahead while they land?
Arnav gave her a tug and unlocked the cockpit door, which he
had locked while making out. The two pilots jumped out of their skin seeing
Arnav and his girl friend inside the cockpit.
He instructed something to the pilots and asked his private airhostess
to leave asking one of the pilots to stay back.
Khushi was awed inside the cockpit, and wondered around the equipments
present ahead of her and many above her head. She had never seen how it looks.
And seeing them thinking how two men manage to fly a plane with the help of
these equipments she felt a tight tug in her belly.
Khushi excitedly went towards the window to look through it.
“Wow” escaped her mouth looking at the beautiful glittering lights in the
islands reflecting in the night sky. It was a paradise she thought. When she
turned towards Arnav, to her shock, she found him preparing herself wearing
mouthpiece and helmet. Before she could reach him, he sat on the pilot seat and
buckled himself. Khushi could only stare at him. How much more can a man look?
And Arnav singh Raizada was the greatest example. His ripped muscular arms
flexed under his shrit and he look no less than a modern, Greek God when he
wore his shades. “Uff! To hot to handle” she couldnot stop her self from
drooling the man who stood right in front of her.
Arnav looked at Khushi and smirked. He liked the fact that
he had some effect on her. He always had that effect on any girl or woman
around but he felt different with Khushi. He wanted to show how manly he was,
when it came to Khushi.
He gestured her to come to her and she did. As if her legs
that their own mind she walked slowly towards him without blinking even for
once. He pulled her towards him and held her by her waist. “agar aise hi dekhti
raho gi to phir mujhe mat blame karna apna pregnancy ke liye”. (“if you
continue to look at me like that, then don’t blame me for your pregnancy”).
“Haan?” Khushi was more confused. Arnav Singh Raizada spoke
to her in hindi for the first time. And his hindi accent was as sexy as his
English. “Kya?” she tried to wiggle out from his grip understanding finally
what he said. She blushed furiously getting caught in her act and she cannot
even deny him outright that she was indeed ogling him top to bottom. She
lowered her eyes while a shy smile played cutely in her lips.
Arnav held her really close to him and dipped his head near
her ears. His warm breath fanned her tendrils while his husky voice made her
hair go up in her back. “I want you to look at me like this when I drive you
crazy Khushi sliding myself inside you. I promise it is going to be your best
time in your entire life”. Khushi closed her eyes getting intensified in the
situation. She just loved when he flirt with her. Just like the way he did few
minutes back. His dirty words were an absolute turn on for her. He had the
ability to make her come with his words only and that’s the kind of effect he
had on her. He was absolutely irresistible for her.
“I wont be able to look at you that time” Khushi hid her
face against his halving chest.
“I get want I want and I will make sure you look at me when
I make you experience the ultimate”, he said claiming her lips.
**
As they decent down it was a beautiful view. Khushi was not
only thrilled but also had the time of her life. It was spectacular view from
the air. As they descend down further Khushi saw Arnav flying his jet towards
an isolated island. The further they got down the view of the island and the
mass was visible to them. Khushi’s eyes widened looking at the property. It was
huge and one of the elite properties she has ever seen. The bungalow vast with
its private beach on all four sided. Some patches of multiple swimming pools
could be seen. She looked at Arnav and then glanced at the property and then
she realized she wasn’t dating an ordinary man. She in her wildest dreams did
not think that her man can own a bungalow in a island. Nope not only the bungalow
but it seemed like he owned the island. Suddenly a tiny fear came in her mind.
How can such and extraordinary man date a small town girl? But before she could
think beyond that she was greeted by a warn kiss by her man. “Welcome to
Raizada Mansion Khush. This is where we are going to have the time of your
life. A special place, for the most beautiful girl of my life”. He flew his jet
across the whole island to show his entire property. Man, she was dating the
most powerful man in India and today she realized that top to bottom.
**
After a smooth landing in the male airport, they were taking
to the premier channel for their immigration. His bodyguards who greeted Arnav
and Khushi made sure every formalities done smoothly and quickly shifted them
towards the helipad. His private heli then took them to their island.
**
“this is my bunglow. Come I will show you the way. Arnav
held her possessively by her waist and kissed her temple.
“this is beautiful” Khushi said with a twinkle in her eyes.
“not as much as you are” Arnav said nuzzling his nose across
her soft skin on her neck.
“Itni bhi khubsoorat nahi hoon” Khushi said punching his
chest and distancing him from her.
Arnav grabbed her hand and pulled her towards him. Looking
intensely in her eyes he said “Let me show you how beautiful you are”. With
that he pulled her aling with him and ran towards the beach.
Khushi struggled to catch with his pace but Arnav did not
seem to stop. He dragged her with him until they reach the shore.
Arnav twrilled her and pulled her in his arms. “I want to
see you nude right now under this moonlight Khushi” he dragged his finger
tracing her neck, then deep down towards her cleavage.
“Are you serious? I cannot be nude in public Arnav” Khushi
said still trying to catch her breath.
“This is my beach and no one is allowed to even hover over
this zone” he said taking her in his arms and walking towards the sea.
“Arnav I seriously cannot do it” Khushi tried to protest.
“We will see that Madam. This is your punishment for not
picking up my calls”.
Arnav walked till the water was near his knees and then
dropped her all of a sudden in the water.
Khushi immerged from water being a little disoriented due to
sudden movement. Her white dress totally clung to her body like a second skin
and her lacy bra got exposed beneath her dress.
“Care to swim?” Arnav challenged her.
“Its almost late night and you want to swim?” Khushi asked
her.
Arnav without any further words dived in the sea and swim
till certain length.
“Come on babes, join me here” he called her out gesturing
her.
Khushi had no option but to swim to him. When she reached,
she found him bare chest. She gaped feeling his muscles and immediately turned
the other side. Arnav approached her and in one go pulled down her zip.
“Arnav!” Khushi gaped and turned towards him wide eyed.
“Shh!” hushing her he slid her dress and exposed her skin.
Her nipples ashamedly peaked towards him waiting for him to claim it and her
twins felt heavy. He touched her waist and flushed her with him. His hard form
pushing on her belly and her nipples kissed his rock solid chest.
“Touch me” he said against her ear huskily and cupped one of
her twins. She obeyed his commend and touched him. “gosh!” he was so thick.
Arnav gasped with she gripped his hard form in her hand and
started massaging it rhythmically. Slow, deliberate strokes which aroused him
badly.
Arnav bend down to claim her nipples, which were ready to
get devoured and she let a soft moan, making Arnav go mad. If it were some
other girl he would have sucked her bud brutally. But as he knew it was her
first time, he had to go slow making sure not to scare her off.
Slowly he kneaded her twins passionately while she increased
her stokes. He made her turn the other side so that her back was flushed with
his chest now and his hard form perfectly placed in between her perfect shaped
butts. Slowly he started pushing himself on her and she felt out of the world.
When he increased his stroked she couldn’t help herself from
asking him “ARNAV! I want you…now”.
Arnav smiled feeling warm by her statement. Not only him, it
was proved that she wanted him with equal desperation.
He gathered his pants, which floated on the sea and took her
in his arms.
**
Placing her on the beach he removed her remaining clothes
which was a matching panty with the lacy bra.
“gosh! Khush you are absolutely sexy babes” he couldnot hide
his excitement. She was no doubt a stunning girl, with perfect curves. It was
the first time he saw her nude and she was much more than he expected. Her
light brown nipples complemented her fair skin.
Khushi closed her eyes in embarrassment feeling absolutely
nude in front of a man.
Arnav removed a condom packet from his wallet and wore it.
He lay right on top of her and kissed her furiously before
he slowly prepared her stroking his finger against her wetzone.
“I will try my best not to hurt you Khushi, but you need to
trust me and be with me. Unless you agree I wont do”.
Khushi opened her eyes and looked at him. She was going to
give everything at she had to the man in front of her. Her assets were now
going to be someone else’s. She was going to give him every right to touch her
the way he wanted. A big step for a small town girl. But yet everything just
felt right between both. She felt happy. She felt alive.
“Please Arnav. I want wait any longer. I trust you” she said
and closed her eyes.
“I trust you” three words more powerful then “I Love you”
and Arnav slowly pushed himself in between her legs. She could feel his form
entering her slowly and carefully filling up the vacant space, moving her
muscles along with his skin. “I am sorry Khushi” he gave the final push
breaking her barrier earning a painful scream. He held her tightly in his arms
kissing her trying to sooth her pain, while few drops of tears slid down her
eyes. It was happy tears, the man made her feel like a woman today. Whatever
inhabitation she had got he had removed it forever. “If you want I can take it
out Khushi. Just tell me. I don’t want to do this if you still feel the pain”,
he said lying static on her.
“I am fine Arnav. Thanks. Thanks for making this so
special”.
Arnav looked at her eyes and her smiling face. She looked
content and happy. Overwhelmed with the new feeling. She was tight and wet.
After her confirmation he paced up until they both climaxed one after another
screaming their name, holding each other as tightly as possible. Arnav had
never had such a hard release in his entire life. And for Khushi it was
something, which was beyond her expectation. The moment she was about to climax
was the best moment she had felt in her entire life. When she could feel
nothing but Arnav penetrating inside her. His moves, his technique made her
come in no time.
Arnav looked at her and smiled. She smiled back too. “I
loved it and I wish to do this everyday now, with you”, he said and kissed her
forehead. “If you are not sore we can so more in your bedroom. What say?”
Khushi pulled him towards her and placed an open mouthed
kiss on his lips and said “I think I will be able to do it few more times
before I quit”.
Arnav gritted his teeth in excitement, “My wild cat, you are
such a tease” with that he covered her in his clothes and picked her up in his
arms. “be ready for few more rounds then. Tomorrow don’t blame me if you are
sore”.
hot update..
ReplyDeleteme blushing!!
Super hot ! Totally worth the wait ! Loved it !
ReplyDeleteCockpit part, beach part every part!
It was worth the wait :D
ReplyDeleteSuper Hot update...
ReplyDeleteFinally they are One...
He made Her His...
Wish to see them together forever...
They Love each other but not realizing it...
I hope they realise before it's toooo late...
Amina87 from IF.....
Awesome and Hot . I TRUST YOU loved the ways khushi said. It holds a lot of meaning
ReplyDeletenice update...a long one too...
ReplyDeletehope they realise....they are made for each other
Sumu
super update
ReplyDeletewow they are already in love with each other......
it must be so cool to land sitting o n the pilots place.....
lucky girl
if arnav is a wild lion khushi is a wild cat
want to read more and more of this story with each update
continue soon
kamalapushpa-IF
Hot and steamy update!!!
ReplyDeleteThese two really wanted each other so badly!!! Finally they did it and Khushi feels whole...
Khushi didn't realize how big of a man Arnav really is until today...
Oh Arnav in the cockpit,me dreaming....
Doing it the beach just seems so romantic.
Can't wait for more...
-hawa1997-IF
Nyce update appy n so smooth :d
ReplyDeleteWow... Super hot....
ReplyDeleteawesome dear...
its awesome story....
thanks dear..
That's soooo HOT & PASSIONATE update dear.....
ReplyDeleteLoved it soooooo muchhhhh...... Still blushing dear......
Continue soo plssss🌺🌺🌺
Very hot....thanks
ReplyDeleteBharti
huh.........Superb HOT
ReplyDeleteFINALLY ARSHI 2GETHER...................
Thanks a lot for updating Appy . It was worth the wait. Oh my looks like there is more to come. (Sweating).
ReplyDeleteWOW....finally....and its haaawwwtttt....and soooo beautifully written....awesome appy.....
ReplyDeletegentle yet pushy , tender yet aggressive, know all with the innocent , public but still private , wah a chap of contrasts but still both matched each other in their passion - that was a very smooth ;) update
ReplyDeletepls continue soon :)
amus5
ah so hot
ReplyDeleteso they finally consummated their passion
wow hottttttt........
ReplyDeletei like ur updates yaar.........
do continue soon dear..........
WID LUV,
~~~RIYA~~~
Jeez, that was hot! Do update more regularly!!
ReplyDeleteSuper hot
ReplyDeleteupdate soon
rohinid
Hot............
ReplyDeletesuper hot... blushing.. worth the wait appy. do update regularly
ReplyDeletenivi
wow
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hot update
Update was awesome..... It's hot & ful of passions... They both are made for each other.....
ReplyDeleteWow!!such a hot and passionate update....finally they are one now, hope they soon realize that it's much more than just a physical attraction..as they are ment to be together forever....eagerly waiting for more update soooooooooooooon...
ReplyDeletewoww that was so passionate update!!!
ReplyDeleteloved it .....
OMG! The private beach of Arnav must be burning by now! [IF: Arshisarunfan]
ReplyDeleteblushing!!blushing!!blushing!!blushing!!
ReplyDeleteOMG that was soo romantic .. doing ur first time in beach .WOW .. loved it ..will be waiting for next dear .. truly HOT and SExy update
appy u r awesome and amazing...and the wait for update was forsure worth it :)
ReplyDeleteOMG!!!! It was super-hot and full of passion…
ReplyDeleteThanks for updating it Appy….
Lovely story and couple too…
a moonlit nyt.........a beach..........the wind ,,,the water.........the nature,,,,,,,,,,,,the perfection........fo two souls to unite............wow............nd thy r so much in each other.....hope thy realize it soon.............<3
ReplyDeleteoh my that was some hot and passionate update. super loved it appy:)
ReplyDeleteThanks for a nice and long update…. Arnav is a Charmer. You have selected the best title for this story… The Charmer and his lady. They love each other… Arnav was so tender and wanted to make Khushi’s first time special… Nicely written. Please post the next one soon…
ReplyDeleteIF Id: Pinkly
Gosh!!!! Dat was so passionate i think dey both are in truly love,,,,,,, lovely update...
ReplyDeletewow..finally they did it.. lolz.. such a hot & passionate udate. loved it
ReplyDeleteHey dear I am orchids8888 from IF.
ReplyDeleteI loved the update.
Finally Arshi became one. Arshi love each other. Arnav was so tender and wanted to make Khushi’s first time special. It was a hot, passionate and romantic update.
Please update soon. Eagerly waiting.
Beautiful update.
ReplyDeleteIt was a roller coster ride for me.
Their moments were beautiful and fantastically written.
Loved this story.
Thanks for update.
Archnahardik123 ( IF )
very hot andpassionate update they really love each other.
ReplyDeletebut yet to realize that deeply. (IF user laksh65)
(Dear appy, please sarununplugged bhi update karo na)
Hi,
ReplyDeleteahem... ahem... this update has tranfered me to another world... i am still blushing.,... nice
amazing
ReplyDeleteOMG...it was so hot & fantastic...! U hv written the every single feeling so lovely....
ReplyDeleteThat was an amazinggg update!!!
ReplyDeleteArnav is filthy rich indeed
Finally they did!!! Loved the background...moon n the beach
Totally worth the wait!!!
awesome !!!
ReplyDeleteThat's a hot update Appy
ReplyDeletewaited for your update long time..but its really warth this wait....everything hot in this update my dear the place and both arnav and khushi they are hungry for each ather love...loved it very much
ReplyDeleteOh goddd dis is a freaking hot update....!
ReplyDeleteI am blushing all d tym while reading it....!
Lovely chappy di...
Finally they r one....
Its simply worth d wait....!
this was dammmmmnnnn hot loved it alot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteparo di.......it was superb.....
ReplyDeletethe way u wrote really very special....
khushi is nw women......
arnav love to do it wid her again n again......
it was excellent...khushi's first time....
update soon......
Long Pending Update Appy, but good one.
ReplyDeleteThat was a sensationally HOT update!
ReplyDeleteThey finally did it! :D
It was a long pending one Appy!
Would love to know how the story moves ahead! how Khushi comes to share a deep bond with him that he lets her into knowing his personal circle and how they move on esp from the present times...
I wish we had a quicker updates for this Appy! :)
Thanks for the update darling! :)
Super HOT.....
ReplyDeleteWow!
ReplyDeleteWhat an update.
Hot! Very hot!
It was also romantic that her first time with any man and that man being Arnav was under the moonlight.
Awesome update.
Hot and passionate update.. on the beach, under moonlight in the water, he marked her his in such an intimate way and eventually two souls became one. They both are not still satiated and are still looking for additional rounds. OMG, and I'm sure they would end up doing it through out the night and with each round it would be more intense before getting exhausted. Khushi felt like a complete woman with Arnav making her his, she had been devoid of this pleasure even though she was married and naturally all her hidden desires were fulfilled by the Charmer, Arnav. Arnav wants to pleasure her and be pleasured by her every night, and I'm sure Khushi would submit herself without any regrets. Will the quest of making out with each other will ever quench their thirst..I doubt.. I hope they both understand that it is not the physical attraction that has drawn them together and made it to bed, but it is the love for each other.. Curiously waiting to see how you are taking this plot further and make them realize that they love each other...
ReplyDeleteHawwwwtttt... Worth the wait...Luved their unison!!
ReplyDeleteAryancha(IF user)
It is really much more than physical love for Arshi,they don't realise it yet,but will soon& then what? Will khushi be scared& run away,or will Arnav try to hold her back?thanks,Appy,Arshi first time,on the beach,by moonlight,I am blushing.
ReplyDeleteTht was Haaawwwwtttt...!!! Arshi making love under the moonlight.. *blushing* super hotttt...!!!!
ReplyDeletedis was super hawt update...
ReplyDeletelov makin on beach..under moonlight..Gosh!!!
update soon
IF rimzu
Yikes......wow so filmy type yaar moonlight love making...hooootttt....
ReplyDeleteYou updated after so long and a hot one too! Is this a compensation to us for the long wait? Hehe
ReplyDeleteLoved it
Blablabla_mo7 IF
arnav is so caring.. god their first time is so passionate.. and hot and even beautiful
ReplyDeletecontinue soon
jas0308 IF
It was indeed a lenghthy update
ReplyDeleteNow Arshi became one
Want to see Arnav"s possessiveness towards Khushi and some arbbaves too
Update soon
bluesobti IF
it was really different and arnav is really caring
ReplyDeleteplz update soon as this was just an awsum ff n plz dont make us wait more update as soon as possible i cant wait anymore.
ReplyDeletefinely she has done
ReplyDeleteon beach oh boy
appy after 2wks u updated plz try to update soon
this update was worth the wait yyaaar
ReplyDeleteits hot
he took his sweet time with her ...i love his caring side for her
please update soon and dont keep long please :)
woaah!
ReplyDeletei dont believe they already did it!
wow!! and arnav can fly a plain as well...? wow!
do update soon ;)
wooaaahhh...
ReplyDeletethey did it...
the actual turn of the story...!!
im so excited for the next update...
BOMB :D
ReplyDeletesikhni_ IF
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ReplyDeleteomg final they did it ahahha nice place tooo coool i love it dear
Amazing.. Loved it!!!
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awesome
ReplyDeleteloved it!!
wow finally khushi has come to terms that herr bf is none other than the ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA
ReplyDeletewow i loved how u described that they finally did it
thank you for pm ...read all chapters in one go ..awesome story on mutual attrection
ReplyDeleteThnx for pm :)
ReplyDeleteLoved the chapter!
FINALLY Khushi is Arnavs :)
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ReplyDeleteWaaoooohhhhhh Hot hot update in such hot temperature. Thanks for the PM and glad that you are back :-) - (kaulpriyanka-IF ID)
ReplyDeleteSo finally they consummate
ReplyDeleteWaaoohhh that was something
ReplyDeleteThey both r made for eachother
Just love it
I guessed that khushi is married to arnav only
I wish this guess comes true
Amazing.
ReplyDeleteSuper hot update.
& full of passion.
Finally they are together....
Can't wait to read more.
VYGA89 IF
very nice update.........thanks for the pm
ReplyDeleteawesome update supper hot and sexy thanks for the pm
ReplyDeletehot and passionate
ReplyDeletethanks for pm
ITS-LEENA
that was so hot and passionate
ReplyDeletesuper hot update
ReplyDeleteFINALLY!!!!!
ReplyDeletethey did....
cockpit send beach part as awesome....
loved arnav's dialogue when he said "I loved it. would lyk to do everyday.."
hot update.....
Finally they did it....
ReplyDeleteAmazing....Full of Passion.....
Goosebumps... millions tiny goosebumps all over. Wow! What a hot update. You have made this women in 40's blush like a teenager. My hubby is enjoying a renewed side of me thanks to you dear Appy.
ReplyDeleteI am ready to see how their relationship matures.
Wow what a way to make somebody yours, all five elements of nature: Air - in plane.
Water- ocean
Land- on the beach
Wind and fire- there hot sex and warmth of maldives wind they are experiencing in each other.
My dear Appy you write with such passion, please continue and update really really soon. Dripping here for next part. ;)
♥♥♥♥♥♥
AAEE
Naughty hotty update
ReplyDeletei totally loved it dear ..
hiddenpearl
Appy di u are fabulous writer i loved it nd our arnav so romantic hooo saansein rukh gayi ek sec ke lyee it was just blasting amazing update..thnkooo so muchhhhhhhh..
ReplyDeleteawesome superhot update plz update soon
ReplyDeleteamzing amaaing
ReplyDeletewonder ful update di....jus loving dis story .....n our dr arshi.....
ReplyDeleteSO finally they united .VERY.. VERY HOT & PASSIONATE UNION OF ARSH. STILL BLUSHING...SO MALDIVES ROMANCE HAS STARTED....
ReplyDeleteWAITING 4 NEXT UPDATE . I LUV U 4 HOW U PORTRAYAT ALL THE EMOTIONS IN UR WRITING. U R ONE OF MY FAVOURITE WRITER.
JDD1959 (IF)
OMG!
ReplyDeletedt was amazin..:)
dey r used 2 each othr nw,,.
usin evry opportunity 2 explore each othr..<3
she new hw rich he was...n loved dd cockpit experience..
n...last thing..
dey did it..
he wanted 2 c her nude in d moonlyt..
n der it ol went..<3
dey did it..:)
n r ready 2 do it mre n more..lol..:D
dey r toooooooooo cute..<3
loved it.:)
thnx.:)
amazing update
ReplyDeletethat was so hot
loved it
Extremely hot update:):):)
ReplyDelete(tinsel)
Wow Finally they did it
ReplyDeleteIt was too hottt and Loved it
ufff...too hot to handle...;)
ReplyDeletetoo sensuous...too hot..too sexy...;)
waiting for the next update :)
Apply I haven't read such a sexy description of Arnav's manly effect so far. Oh my. All man with rippling muscles, flying his private plane in his aviators!!! Your description was soo, soo good; of his manly appearance and ultra manly behavior, forget khushi, it drove me crazy. Thanks for the same. Immensely satisfying yaar!
ReplyDeleteIt was super hot update
ReplyDeleteLoved it
amazing.
ReplyDeleteMISTIE,IF
jst lvd it.......amazing.....
ReplyDeleteThis was A FAB update Appy ....
ReplyDeleteLove it and Finally they've become one ... which was really special ......
Please do update again soon ....
can't wait to read more .......
~ sweetvanie `
Wow appy that was super hot
ReplyDeletewhen they two r together there is passion in the air
their first time was beautifully written as always
still wondering though how Arnav will react once khushi husband reappears
now he has made her his I doubt he could ever let her go no matter what
thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon
can't wait to see what happens next
Wow appy another powerfully hot update
ReplyDeletefinally he has made her his
loved the whole desending to the island scene was nice touch showed his power
their swim n first time was beautifully written
still looking forward to seeing how Arnav will react when khushis husband reappears
until then really enjoying how close they're becoming n can't wait to read more
thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon
Hadn't thought about that one!!, khushi's husband reappearing!!! Interesting.
Deletei read all the chapters and will comment now - freakin awesome work here
ReplyDeleteundercoverrhappy
awesumly hawt...loved it...beautifully written...continue soooon....
ReplyDeleteushankitvc
awesome yaar..........
ReplyDeletesooo hot and emotional one yaar........
cant wait for the next one........
---aarushh(IF)
amazing update...
ReplyDeleteSo hot... loved it.....
wonderful work...........i loved it :-)
ReplyDeleteVery nice update.
ReplyDelete-desisweetheart9 from IF.
Pls update soon
ReplyDeletewow they did it!!! extremely hot update!!
ReplyDeletewow,that was hot and sexy
ReplyDeleteHot and passionate update.............
ReplyDeleteBeautiful story. I read first time. Thanks for sending link.
ReplyDelete-cvrocks
R u nytime near planning to update this one.eagerly waiting for this update
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